Poems by the board. - Page 5

Gabriel · 03-11-2001, 10:26 PM

A shattered mind,
thinking in tangents,
a spark into fire,
losing the thread,
lossed the plot,
can't concentrate,
Mind wonders,
no answers only questions,
inpersonal,
avoided,
no help,
words, meaning lost,
slience,
perhaps it is best.

Gabriel · 03-11-2001, 10:30 PM

Griever I only just noticed that it only two words per line.

oh WHERE IS EVERYONE ELSES POEMS!!!!!!! COME ON. Or I'm going to post again and again with crude verses.

Ladyzekke · 03-11-2001, 10:33 PM

There you are Gabriel! Where've you been?!! Check our our story thread, Stealthy didn't show up, so it's your turn! I added a bit to it.

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Griever · 03-11-2001, 10:37 PM

the distraught heart
wanders
wanders into space
walking blindy
walking gently
waving for someone to see
waving for someone to help
wailing for someone to hear
wailing for someone to care
weaving itself for beauty
weaving itself so it pleases the eye
wandering still
waving still
wailing still
weaving still
wondering
where could have all the people gone?

there! now ya happy? you forced me to think!

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Tifa loves her Cloud, Squall loves his Rinoa, Sephiroth... loves his Masamune.

Gabriel · 03-11-2001, 10:45 PM

Sorry griver but you now what they say, first times always the hardest.

Good poem. How do you come up with them?

Griever · 03-11-2001, 10:50 PM

i wanted to try something new. i incorporated your writing style, you know, the two-three word punch? hehe...

as for coming up with them, i just think impromptu. i usually start with a phrase and work from there...

well, thats impromptu number three:the distraught heart.

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Tifa loves her Cloud, Squall loves his Rinoa, Sephiroth... loves his Masamune.

Gabriel · 03-11-2001, 11:14 PM

Griever, our styles aren't that different, mine are usally inspared by a word or thought and are normal written down first time in the post box.

Bahamut · 03-12-2001, 10:11 AM

yep! or how bout a thought? just think of one thing, and these emotions start to develop.. lots of 'em that you can formulate into poetry...

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I...AM...BAHAMUT

Gabriel · 03-12-2001, 07:36 PM

Standing alone,
in a crowd of friends,
Know to all,
Yet unknow at heart,
Being what they want,
But not me,
So long a copy,
I lost myself ,
I'm a pretender,
A fake,
A shadow of peers,
Yet alone I am,
What am I?
WHAT AM I?

(Hmmmmm....... Not the best I ever done, but probably the oddest.)

Bahamut · 03-12-2001, 11:44 PM

wow... like a riddle and poem, and pissed off man all in one!

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I...AM...BAHAMUT

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03-11-2001, 10:26 PM	#41
Gabriel Emerald Dragon Join Date: March 4, 2001 Location: England Age: 42 Posts: 920	A shattered mind, thinking in tangents, a spark into fire, losing the thread, lossed the plot, can't concentrate, Mind wonders, no answers only questions, inpersonal, avoided, no help, words, meaning lost, slience, perhaps it is best.

03-11-2001, 10:30 PM	#42
Gabriel Emerald Dragon Join Date: March 4, 2001 Location: England Age: 42 Posts: 920	Griever I only just noticed that it only two words per line. oh WHERE IS EVERYONE ELSES POEMS!!!!!!! COME ON. Or I'm going to post again and again with crude verses.

03-11-2001, 10:33 PM	#43
Ladyzekke Ironworks Atomic Moderator Join Date: January 7, 2001 Location: Virginia, U.S.A. Age: 58 Posts: 9,005	There you are Gabriel! Where've you been?!! Check our our story thread, Stealthy didn't show up, so it's your turn! I added a bit to it. ------------------

03-11-2001, 10:37 PM	#44
Griever Manshoon Join Date: March 1, 2001 Location: Philippines Posts: 211	the distraught heart wanders wanders into space walking blindy walking gently waving for someone to see waving for someone to help wailing for someone to hear wailing for someone to care weaving itself for beauty weaving itself so it pleases the eye wandering still waving still wailing still weaving still wondering where could have all the people gone? there! now ya happy? you forced me to think! ------------------ Tifa loves her Cloud, Squall loves his Rinoa, Sephiroth... loves his Masamune.

03-11-2001, 10:45 PM	#45
Gabriel Emerald Dragon Join Date: March 4, 2001 Location: England Age: 42 Posts: 920	Sorry griver but you now what they say, first times always the hardest. Good poem. How do you come up with them?

03-11-2001, 10:50 PM	#46
Griever Manshoon Join Date: March 1, 2001 Location: Philippines Posts: 211	i wanted to try something new. i incorporated your writing style, you know, the two-three word punch? hehe... as for coming up with them, i just think impromptu. i usually start with a phrase and work from there... well, thats impromptu number three:the distraught heart. ------------------ Tifa loves her Cloud, Squall loves his Rinoa, Sephiroth... loves his Masamune.

03-11-2001, 11:14 PM	#47
Gabriel Emerald Dragon Join Date: March 4, 2001 Location: England Age: 42 Posts: 920	Griever, our styles aren't that different, mine are usally inspared by a word or thought and are normal written down first time in the post box.

03-12-2001, 10:11 AM	#48
Bahamut Iron Throne Cult Join Date: March 12, 2001 Location: Manila, Philippines Age: 40 Posts: 4,864	yep! or how bout a thought? just think of one thing, and these emotions start to develop.. lots of 'em that you can formulate into poetry... ------------------ I...AM...BAHAMUT

03-12-2001, 07:36 PM	#49
Gabriel Emerald Dragon Join Date: March 4, 2001 Location: England Age: 42 Posts: 920	Standing alone, in a crowd of friends, Know to all, Yet unknow at heart, Being what they want, But not me, So long a copy, I lost myself , I'm a pretender, A fake, A shadow of peers, Yet alone I am, What am I? WHAT AM I? (Hmmmmm....... Not the best I ever done, but probably the oddest.)

03-12-2001, 11:44 PM	#50
Bahamut Iron Throne Cult Join Date: March 12, 2001 Location: Manila, Philippines Age: 40 Posts: 4,864	wow... like a riddle and poem, and pissed off man all in one! ------------------ I...AM...BAHAMUT

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