My fictionpress story (Chapter 3 - Part 1 added on 21/11) - Page 2

Bozos of Bones · 11-07-2004, 01:47 PM

When the mage opened up the portal, and produced the stuff to give to them. His arms just vanished inside it, it was kewl!

philip · 11-07-2004, 01:52 PM

Great start of the story! I just read the prologue and I'll post again once I read chapter 1 [img]smile.gif[/img]

Xen · 11-07-2004, 03:47 PM

I like how the battle on Zerd is described.

dplax · 11-07-2004, 03:51 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Xen:
I like how the battle on Zerd is described.

Actually the place is called Zard and there was no battle there, but thanks for your input anyway.

Oh and BTW Ross and Bozos I only sent that part over to the two of you on MSN so that you could proofread it. Glad you liked it though.

[ 11-07-2004, 03:52 PM: Message edited by: dplax ]

Bozos of Bones · 11-07-2004, 04:13 PM

I'm sorry, I was bored and I kinda skipped on the whole battle part. [img]tongue.gif[/img]

dplax · 11-07-2004, 04:17 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Bozos of Bones:
I'm sorry, I was bored and I kinda skipped on the whole battle part. [img]tongue.gif[/img]

What battle part? You mean there was a battle part? I must not have noticed writing that. Sorry I'll go and check. *checks* Nope, no visible battle in Zard. I don't know where Xen got that from.

[ 11-07-2004, 04:17 PM: Message edited by: dplax ]

dplax · 11-14-2004, 05:11 PM

Chapter 2 part 1 is done. You can find it here

dplax · 11-17-2004, 04:18 PM

Chapter 2 part 2 is done, but for some reason fictionpress won't let me sign in...

I'll edit the topic title when it is up.

EDIT: It seems fictionpress is being upgraded during a 24 hour period.

[ 11-17-2004, 04:55 PM: Message edited by: dplax ]

RoSs_bg2_rox · 11-17-2004, 04:20 PM

Well, both parts of chapter 2 were a good read, recommend it! [img]smile.gif[/img]

dplax · 11-17-2004, 04:30 PM

Thanks Ross. And of course thanks again for proofreading them and catching my mistakes before they would be made available to a larger public.

11-07-2004, 01:47 PM	#11
Bozos of Bones Apophis Join Date: July 29, 2003 Location: The Underdark cavern of Zagreb Age: 38 Posts: 4,679	When the mage opened up the portal, and produced the stuff to give to them. His arms just vanished inside it, it was kewl! __________________ MAKE LOVE, NOT SPAM!

11-07-2004, 04:13 PM	#15
Bozos of Bones Apophis Join Date: July 29, 2003 Location: The Underdark cavern of Zagreb Age: 38 Posts: 4,679	I'm sorry, I was bored and I kinda skipped on the whole battle part. [img]tongue.gif[/img] __________________ MAKE LOVE, NOT SPAM!

11-14-2004, 05:11 PM	#17
dplax Jack Burton Join Date: July 19, 2003 Location: an expat living in France Age: 40 Posts: 5,577	Chapter 2 part 1 is done. You can find it here __________________

11-17-2004, 04:18 PM	#18
dplax Jack Burton Join Date: July 19, 2003 Location: an expat living in France Age: 40 Posts: 5,577	Chapter 2 part 2 is done, but for some reason fictionpress won't let me sign in... I'll edit the topic title when it is up. EDIT: It seems fictionpress is being upgraded during a 24 hour period. [ 11-17-2004, 04:55 PM: Message edited by: dplax ] __________________

11-17-2004, 04:20 PM	#19
RoSs_bg2_rox Zartan Join Date: May 20, 2003 Location: Near Aberdeen, Scotland Age: 36 Posts: 5,225	Well, both parts of chapter 2 were a good read, recommend it! [img]smile.gif[/img] __________________ [img]\"http://img.ranchoweb.com/images/ladyzekke/dragonwater2.gif\" alt=\" - \" />

11-07-2004, 01:52 PM	#12
philip Galvatron Join Date: June 24, 2002 Location: aa Posts: 2,101	Great start of the story! I just read the prologue and I'll post again once I read chapter 1 [img]smile.gif[/img]

11-07-2004, 03:47 PM	#13
Xen Symbol of Moradin Join Date: June 5, 2002 Location: Slovenia,Ljubljana Age: 37 Posts: 8,554	I like how the battle on Zerd is described.

11-17-2004, 04:30 PM	#20
dplax Jack Burton Join Date: July 19, 2003 Location: an expat living in France Age: 40 Posts: 5,577	Thanks Ross. And of course thanks again for proofreading them and catching my mistakes before they would be made available to a larger public. __________________

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