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03-09-2001, 03:39 AM
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Manshoon
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impromptu number 2: Stress Reliever
i tread on this land on where i see destruction glass shards cutting my feet some objects beyond recognition i hear screams of rage desperate cries a wolfs howl of despair i hear hatred, with no hint of care in it i have entered virgin territory a place i do not know its vocabulary escapes me i am alone, with no allies i am in a wasteland on where we throw our madness into this black hole of nothingness ------------------  Tifa has her Cloud, Squall his Rinoa, Sephiroth?? |
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03-09-2001, 10:20 AM
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Ma'at - Goddess of Truth & Justice
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Location: Delaware OH USA
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Moonlit nite
Stars above with my love, with me love a lingering touch heartfelt kiss happiness with my love, with my love words unsaid thoughts mispoke with my love, with my love misunderstanding thoughtlessness feelings hurt feeling betrayed with my love, with my love phone call in the night anger pain suffering talking it out with my love, with my love a second ring in the night crying laughing forgiving with my love, with my love driving hugs embrace intimacy with my love, with my love side by side smiling sleeping with my love, with my love. |
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03-09-2001, 11:08 AM
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Elite Waterdeep Guard
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My thanks to Melusine. I appreciate the compliment, but unfortunately now my ego is swelling to unusual size.
-Grebki P.S. I like this thread, there is real talent among the poets here. ------------------ Why, sometimes I've believed as many as six impossible things before breakfast. And then I went and made at least three of them come true before lunch. |
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03-09-2001, 06:34 PM
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Ironworks Atomic Moderator
 Join Date: January 7, 2001
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Once again I am humbled. You guys are all terrific writers! I love it! Don't stop now!
YEBUMP! ------------------ 
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03-09-2001, 10:28 PM
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Emerald Dragon
 Join Date: March 4, 2001
Location: England
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walking,
always forward, never back, not waiting, or slowing, walking, ever onwards, from the past. to the future, ever walking, never reaching, Alway walking endless foot falls, echos of bone on stone, flesh long worn away, contining, never stopping, Walking, one foot first, the other second, right,TICK, left, TOCK, ever walking, never stopping, never waiting, from the start, until the end, endless walking. ------------------ 
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03-10-2001, 10:37 AM
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Manshoon
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that was good trias.. hehe very good.
 ------------------ Tifa loves her Cloud, Squall loves his Rinoa, Sephiroth... loves his sword. 
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03-11-2001, 12:37 AM
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Emerald Dragon
Join Date: March 4, 2001
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He comes,
unbiden, undesired, He comes, No thunder, Or lighting, Just perfect sun, He comes, And leave ruin, unchangable moments, Unbiden, unwanted, uncalled, He comes. |
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03-11-2001, 01:43 AM
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Manshoon
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sounds like tragedy... well, yeah. f*ck it...
------------------ Tifa loves her Cloud, Squall loves his Rinoa, Sephiroth... loves his Masamune.
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03-11-2001, 01:46 AM
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Emerald Dragon
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Griever 'HE' is ment to be anger but it written so people can make 'HE' what ever they want.
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03-11-2001, 01:48 AM
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Manshoon
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yes... its this figurative thing that only the author knows. i mean the poems true intention...
 nice stuff..always a phrase or two words for more emphasis right? ------------------ Tifa loves her Cloud, Squall loves his Rinoa, Sephiroth... loves his Masamune.
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