Ellipse (A poem I am to send her) - Page 2

Reeka · 02-11-2002, 08:48 PM

Lovely and very touching, Ryan.

Bahamut · 02-12-2002, 07:34 AM

shouldn't I change the ending? I mean it is like saying that she is still in love with me and asking if she still thinks that I am still in love with her... I mean... bah help me!

thanks for the advice HArk, the compliment Reeka [img]smile.gif[/img]

Harkoliar · 02-12-2002, 09:07 AM

quote:

shouldn't I change the ending? I mean it is like saying that she is still in love with me and asking if she still thinks that I am still in love with her... I mean... bah help me!

women sure is hard to understand eh?? [img]smile.gif[/img] dont worry your not the only one. during my own time of crisis, and when i wrote those two poems, i wanted the past (the time i spent with her... all the good times) never to change, yet time always changes and so do people. when she went to college, i was never as close anymore with her. when i went to college (where she also studies) she had her own barkada. it really took me time to tell myself that change was already there although i refused to see it. it took me time to tell myself that we can still be friends. it was hard for me to tell this and took me a couple of weeks to bang it into my head. maybe your feeling what i went through?

Bahamut · 02-12-2002, 11:27 AM

i am feeling what you are feeling and worse I am sure of it

anyways thanks for your time man.. your helping a lot

Bahamut · 02-13-2002, 10:32 AM

come on guys I need more input

"to send or not to send, that is the question" [img]smile.gif[/img]

Curian The Paladin · 02-15-2002, 09:48 AM

quote:
Originally posted by Bahamut:
come on guys I need more input

"to send or not to send, that is the question" [img]smile.gif[/img]

The day still passes and I still await for you;
I know you have somebody that you love true.
But I will wait even if it breaks me in two;
coz’ my love is really meant for you.

Hope this is a good one to end your poem( I don’t know if this is good or it sucks [img]graemlins/question.gif[/img] )

My advice to you is to give it to her, its really hard if you have something that you want to do and cant do it.( I know the feeling man. [img]graemlins/erm.gif[/img] ). You wont lose anything if you try. Anyway good luck to you fellow Pinoy.

Sir Curian
Protector of Good
[img]graemlins/1djsmile.gif[/img]

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Bahamut · 02-16-2002, 02:34 AM

thanks man!

I will send it to her...

Redblueflare · 02-16-2002, 02:43 AM

Gee, looks like you had your mind made up fom the beggining Bahumut. [img]smile.gif[/img] Let's hope you have better luck than I do. [img]tongue.gif[/img] Oh it was a beautiful poem btw!

Bahamut · 02-16-2002, 02:50 AM

well I was looking if you guys would say no, but you guys said send it so I will... [img]smile.gif[/img]

Thanks RedBlue! I mean I am not expecting anything... but hell, who knows?

02-11-2002, 08:48 PM	#11
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02-12-2002, 07:34 AM	#12
Bahamut Iron Throne Cult Join Date: March 12, 2001 Location: Manila, Philippines Age: 40 Posts: 4,864	shouldn't I change the ending? I mean it is like saying that she is still in love with me and asking if she still thinks that I am still in love with her... I mean... bah help me! thanks for the advice HArk, the compliment Reeka [img]smile.gif[/img] __________________ http://makeallthedifference.blogspot.com http://www.bratgirlcentral.com/cgi-b.../ikonboard.cgi

02-12-2002, 09:07 AM	#13
Harkoliar Jack Burton Join Date: March 21, 2001 Location: Philippines, but now Harbor City Sydney Age: 42 Posts: 5,556	quote: shouldn't I change the ending? I mean it is like saying that she is still in love with me and asking if she still thinks that I am still in love with her... I mean... bah help me! women sure is hard to understand eh?? [img]smile.gif[/img] dont worry your not the only one. during my own time of crisis, and when i wrote those two poems, i wanted the past (the time i spent with her... all the good times) never to change, yet time always changes and so do people. when she went to college, i was never as close anymore with her. when i went to college (where she also studies) she had her own barkada. it really took me time to tell myself that change was already there although i refused to see it. it took me time to tell myself that we can still be friends. it was hard for me to tell this and took me a couple of weeks to bang it into my head. maybe your feeling what i went through? __________________ Catch me if you can..

02-12-2002, 11:27 AM	#14
Bahamut Iron Throne Cult Join Date: March 12, 2001 Location: Manila, Philippines Age: 40 Posts: 4,864	i am feeling what you are feeling and worse I am sure of it anyways thanks for your time man.. your helping a lot __________________ http://makeallthedifference.blogspot.com http://www.bratgirlcentral.com/cgi-b.../ikonboard.cgi

02-13-2002, 10:32 AM	#15
Bahamut Iron Throne Cult Join Date: March 12, 2001 Location: Manila, Philippines Age: 40 Posts: 4,864	come on guys I need more input "to send or not to send, that is the question" [img]smile.gif[/img] __________________ http://makeallthedifference.blogspot.com http://www.bratgirlcentral.com/cgi-b.../ikonboard.cgi

02-15-2002, 09:48 AM	#16
Curian The Paladin Manshoon Join Date: November 17, 2001 Location: Philippines Age: 42 Posts: 151	quote: Originally posted by Bahamut: come on guys I need more input "to send or not to send, that is the question" [img]smile.gif[/img] The day still passes and I still await for you; I know you have somebody that you love true. But I will wait even if it breaks me in two; coz’ my love is really meant for you. Hope this is a good one to end your poem( I don’t know if this is good or it sucks [img]graemlins/question.gif[/img] ) My advice to you is to give it to her, its really hard if you have something that you want to do and cant do it.( I know the feeling man. [img]graemlins/erm.gif[/img] ). You wont lose anything if you try. Anyway good luck to you fellow Pinoy. Sir Curian Protector of Good [img]graemlins/1djsmile.gif[/img] [ 02-15-2002: Message edited by: Curian The Paladin ] [ 02-15-2002: Message edited by: Curian The Paladin ] [ 02-15-2002: Message edited by: Curian The Paladin ] __________________ <br />Sir Curian<br />Protector of Good<br /> <img border=\"0\" alt=\"[tgestar1]\" title=\"\" src=\"graemlins/tgestar1.gif\" /> <img border=\"0\" alt=\"[1djsmile]\" title=\"\" src=\"graemlins/1djsmile.gif\" /> <img border=\"0\" alt=\"[tgestar1]\" title=\"\" src=\"graemlins/tgestar1.gif\" />

02-16-2002, 02:34 AM	#17
Bahamut Iron Throne Cult Join Date: March 12, 2001 Location: Manila, Philippines Age: 40 Posts: 4,864	thanks man! I will send it to her... __________________ http://makeallthedifference.blogspot.com http://www.bratgirlcentral.com/cgi-b.../ikonboard.cgi

02-16-2002, 02:43 AM	#18
Redblueflare Galvatron Join Date: May 9, 2001 Location: The backwoods in Georgia sigh Age: 41 Posts: 2,151	Gee, looks like you had your mind made up fom the beggining Bahumut. [img]smile.gif[/img] Let's hope you have better luck than I do. [img]tongue.gif[/img] Oh it was a beautiful poem btw! __________________ <br /><br />\"If you ever need me just whistle, and i\'ll come running. I promise. <img border=\"0\" title=\"\" alt=\"[Smile]\" src=\"smile.gif\" /> <br />Kupo, Kupo! A man can\'t get a sword if he can\'t dance! <img border=\"0\" title=\"\" alt=\"[Big Grin]\" src=\"biggrin.gif\" />

02-16-2002, 02:50 AM	#19
Bahamut Iron Throne Cult Join Date: March 12, 2001 Location: Manila, Philippines Age: 40 Posts: 4,864	well I was looking if you guys would say no, but you guys said send it so I will... [img]smile.gif[/img] Thanks RedBlue! I mean I am not expecting anything... but hell, who knows? __________________ http://makeallthedifference.blogspot.com http://www.bratgirlcentral.com/cgi-b.../ikonboard.cgi

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