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#151 |
Iron Throne Cult
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Location: Manila, Philippines
Age: 40
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Four Seasons: Winter
Here comes snow Freezes the fields The enormous trees Wind following its commands And leaves fight to live As winter comes Snow falls And in our hearts Thoughts freeze Emotion stops Autumn softens the heart Winter makes it sleep Spring warms the long frozen feelings And summer consumes the fire within But now is the time to sleep... ------------------ ![]() My love for her is beyond words... beyond time... you know this [This message has been edited by Bahamut (edited 08-18-2001).] [This message has been edited by Bahamut (edited 08-18-2001).] |
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#152 |
Symbol of Cyric
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Yup! I like this one too Bahamut!
![]() ------------------ ![]() Having abandoned my search for truth, I am now looking for a good fantasy. For R³ in thanks: Sometimes I think I understand everything, then I regain consciousness. |
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#153 |
Ra
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Location: Ant Hill
Age: 50
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Follwing the rules of the haiku:
5 syllables 7 syllables 5 syllables Three lines. Im not 100% but pretty sure that this is the way it goes. I dont always follow the rules...poetic license or something like that. |
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#154 |
Iron Throne Cult
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No that cannot be... it is a haiku coz it IS a haiku due to those rules... there can be no such thing with well-known patterns and styles... some are very distinct and only links one author. Do that, and well... maybe we get toasted...
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#155 |
Galvatron
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Location: Everywhere I wanna go its already where I am,cause I am already there
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This song I think is really good, I like it alot:
Angel She can draw angels from the sky. She is like lighting crashing. She was like clouds in motion. She took me through the mountains. Its crumbling from my memory, now I have a reason to go back to sleep. We rode the thunder, put flashes in the sky. We flew through the plains, sat at the waters edge. He hair was like a yellow sun. Glistened through the air. She can draw angels from the sky. She is like lighting crashing. She was like clouds in motion. She took me through the mountains. Whistling through the air, going through the fog of clouds. Walked through the cedar of the forest. Went through the air of the ocean. She can draw angels from the sky. She is like lighting crashing. She was like clouds in motion. She took me through the mountains. In a far away land we went. Snow capped mountains all about. Warm springs flow openly, as do we. In a far away land, a voice calls me. I come too. She is gone. ------------------ ![]() So if in the forest look behind you, because that where the ranger is going to be |
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#156 |
Iron Throne Cult
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Nice one GR! Liked it too!
Hmm.. I will be thinking of Haiku next ------------------ ![]() My love for her is beyond words... beyond time... you know this |
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#157 |
Zhentarim Guard
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I've been away for a week and unable to log in for a week or two before that so this is why I haven't been posting.
Don't think I have posted this before - the lyrics to what I think is the best song I have ever written. November November and leaves glow like embers in colours of copper and rusty old nails.High in the sky white lines catch fire - sun touching far off jet trails. Far up above me the wild geese are flying,Ragged black arrows on an icy blue sky.Oh to go with them when I hear them cryingCalling to me to come fly, in November.The first Autumn frost have left a fine dusting of magic to cover the world.Morning sunlight makes pinpricks of bright shining diamonds, silvery pearls.Far up above me the wild geese are flying,Ragged black arrows on an icy blue sky.Oh to go with them when I hear them cryingCalling to me to come fly, in November.The world seems so still and a finger of chill is touching and tingling my face.The air is so clear that the bare bones of trees make a pattern of black Spanish lace.Far up above me the wild geese are flying,Ragged black arrows on an icy blue sky.Oh to go with them when I hear them cryingCalling to me to come fly, in November.Late afternoon I'll be going home soon. The sky's turning golden and green As the day dies the sun paints the sky in colours of roses and dreamsFar up above me the wild geese are flying,Ragged black arrows on an icy blue sky.Oh to go with them when I hear them cryingCalling to me to come fly, in November. |
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#158 |
Iron Throne Cult
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I am... speechless... great read
Hope I can hear it being played by you someday... ![]() ------------------ ![]() My love for her is beyond words... beyond time... you know this |
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#159 |
Ma'at - Goddess of Truth & Justice
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Don't want this to drop.
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#160 |
Elite Waterdeep Guard
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AFTER NOON
I sit on this solitary patch of newly-cut grass that tickles the bare skin of my thigh making me itch all over. I stare at the trees off in the distance, their leaves rustling in that unspoken language I wish I could understand. I turn to face the wind that whips my hair into a tangled mess, stinging my face, my eyes. I smile as tiny pellets fall from the sky, refreshing the thirst of my soul. I wonder, for all the beauty in the world, why God cries. ![]() back from the dead a resurrection that slowly withers away as i die the stress of college life weighing down on me |
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