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It's sad to see that these post types don't live very long. Heh, does no one out there have something to add?
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just a play on the first 2 paragraphs but all in all bloody good story man
In an quiet old village south of the castle Gallyan, lived a young boy who was orphaned as an infant only to be found by an aging night the aging nights Nme Ws Xavier a renowned night whos name was well known for hes quick blade, knowing that the young boy would be classed as an outsider he poured all hes knowledge into the boy and started training him to be a knight. As a squire he learnt to be agile and throw himself in battle to protect others as their god, Many villagers were at ease with the young orphan squire living and learning in there village knowing full well in time he would be an defender of formidable strength being taught by Xavier, Zenan was the best student that Xavier ever had even tho he only had 2 in his short life. He could read and write which many of the other towns children had trouble doing let alone mastering and he figured out puzzles and training obstacles faster than any other boy there, along with the reading and writing he became an adept at swordplay and defense, able to predict when an man is going to strike even when he has his back turned and able to slash a mans chest open without even looking like he unsheafed hes sword The castle of Gallyan was an old castle yet its beauty was still there with it. Its walls were very white and torches lit up the bright walls as you walked down the street. Unlike many other castles such as Terbirum castle and Craaytana castle, The king osirus was a healthy young bloke aged at 28 with thick blonde hair and the queen Evelina II was aged 25 with a good personality and long black hair. They had 3 children already but only 2 have stayed at the castle, the good ones. The oldest was the one who ran away at the age of 13 from Gallyan castle because he was an unliking boy. He never wanted to play with other boys and always stayed in his room, his black hair was teased a lot because it was dreaded. His sister Karissa had long blonde hair and had many friends outside the castle, and she knew how to fight if one of the many citizens had decided to kidnap her. Dungeons were set up at the other side of the town because of the screaming of hunger due to the tough laws make the kingdom a peaceful and happy one, Although some think it is the law that makes it a dreaded place to live. The other sibling was the youngest smartest one of the family. His hair was short and he owned his own set of armour and swords in his bedroom although he was to young to wear and use them. He loved getting out of the castle and playing with their young family horse, Splash.
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