02-10-2002, 10:33 AM | #1 |
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the evolution of a year passed
still the endeavor set burns clear, imprinted on the inpenetrable memory lane dust has aged the pictures paper crumples in sight of time and yet the print never runs away and memory still picks it up with great accuracy memory bids that we were together on that blurred blue sky memory says that you spoke of roses sweet and clear on that christmas night wheels have turned a full cycle on where your rose for me is now buried alongside mine, yet mine, is still up on the ground blooming, every minute of everyday we parted ways, without never knowing why we tore our hearts, without never wondering why yet i wonder, always asking the question do you still have the rose i gave you? i know i still have yours (rose is equivalent to love. in essence, in this poem, rose is love, so when i say rose, it actually means love) |
02-10-2002, 10:36 AM | #2 |
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Thats really nice Bahamut!
And the Red rose is the flower of love, where as the white rose is a flower of death (is it not?)
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02-10-2002, 10:38 AM | #3 |
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rose is love in the poem... not a symbol
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02-10-2002, 11:49 AM | #4 |
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That really is a wonderful poem, Bahamut. Very moving.
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02-10-2002, 11:51 AM | #5 |
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Very good piece there Bahamut, and I'm sure she will love it.
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02-11-2002, 03:30 AM | #6 |
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What a cool poem!
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02-11-2002, 07:03 AM | #7 |
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uhh thanks guys... [img]smile.gif[/img]
i won't be sure if she would love it.. she's got a bf for crying out loud... LOL but then the eternal question has been bugging me for ages... |
02-11-2002, 07:10 AM | #8 |
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That is truly beautiful!
Wonderful poem, from the heart.
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02-11-2002, 07:27 AM | #9 |
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thanks Epona! hehehe
now i am wondering if I am to still send her this... i mean it will just probably ruin her day... |
02-11-2002, 09:33 AM | #10 |
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hey bahamut!
give it to her!! what do you have to lose? (besides a angry boyfriend who became a ex-boyfriend because of you, hehe just kidding). honestly, if you wish to give it, then do so, what do you have to lose by it? coming from experience, i actually wrote a similar poem to a girl i was chasing last year (who broke my heart 2 times already ) and still turned me down again... sigh... but anyway here is goes: (it is around last last year during x-mas and this poem includes a gift, its been a long time ago) When You Read this Letter -It must be Christmas Day -Morn or Eve/ Day or Night -I hope you are doing Ok -Today is “d” season to be jolly -today let no lie block thy eye -Today only peace and love -Today is Christmas time -Time has passed by so fast -You are in college, my high school wont last -Nearly a year and a half of Friendship ties -I thank thee for thy friendship that binds -I thank thee for thy friendship -Sometimes I wish for more or less -I speak with an open heart -I truly don’t know what is for the best -I am not ready -Yet ready am “I”? -It’s been a year -And all the time it’s been “hi” -It’s been a year since that fatal incident -A memory I wish to forget -Now I guess I only ask for thy friendship -Nothing more, nothing less -Friendship I only ask -And let bygones be bygones -I wish to start anew -And have the friendship we once knew -Anyway I am far from the topic now -Yet I have said what I wish to say -Have a merry Christmas and a happy new year -Let us go on to our merry way Remember: ~ Be Strong Be True May the Lord be with you … God Bless and Take Care nothing special happened when i gave it to her, but it did make my heart feel a little better by giving it. (but she turned me down anyway). this one i just made a couple of months ago when i really wanted to say goodbye ( hey its my fault, i could not get over her for nearly 2 years ) The day you stopped calling The day when I started missing Never knowing how much value you are Now my reach to you is now so far Those times long past Everything happened so fast I knew things wont last Yet how I wished things was what was Now I have seen you again Pent up feeling what was closed, opened once again Yet I know things are different between you and I I don’t know how, I don’t know why I feel I have become a pest to you Always the same, nothing new It’s not your fault for I made the judgment It’s not you to blame, its not you who has the burden I wish to say goodbye This last gift is my last sign Of the love I hoped to have Of the joy I wished for you yet never had As I cut this ties that bind me to you I will retain the friendship I have with you Never forget, this is not the end Yet when I see you, it will be the eyes not of a lover but of a friend but i never actually gave this to her yet, since i wanted to see if my courting change... answer: very little but i still havent gotten around to give it to her... reason: i found a new girl [img]smile.gif[/img] . its kinda strange actually, i had no intention of her (my new GF) to be my GF but it just kinda happened last month actually. but i guess its one of the best kind of love. the girl i was courting before is still my friend despite my childish behavior of love towards her ( i confessed that to her) [img]smile.gif[/img] . so what do you have to lose?
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