Chapt. 1 of a story by me - comments please!

[Neb]

Originally posted by Kaz: BUMP! I want more replies!

I could give you an extra reply if you want more , how far are you with the story anyway? I'd love to read part 2, or just half of part 2.

[Kaz]

Like I said, currently working on the IW story. When it's done (won't take THAT long, I hope), I'll continue to write this one. It's working better than the old one I started, which stagnated. I couldn't think of anything to write, the plot was too rigid. The idea was cool, but I think I'll leave it aside for a couple of years and then try again.

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[Neb]

Any chance of us getting to see a few pages of the IW story?

(Damn flood-control.)

Very well done Kaz, what an excellent piece of prose
I always thought you had a wonderful way with words and it seems I was right. I think you have an incredible gift for writing and I personally would love to hear more of whatever you write in the future. Keep it up Kaz, you're brilliant

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[Mouse]

Excellent work. At this rate it wont be long before I am writing one of my short reviews of your first novel in the books forum LOL

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Mouse
(Occasional crooner and all round friendly Scottish rodent)

[This message has been edited by Mouse (edited 10-08-2001).]

[Kaz]

Originally posted by Neb: Any chance of us getting to see a few pages of the IW story? (Damn flood-control.)

We're still in the note stage - copying and pasting all threads that pertain to the subject. Hopefully we can start actually WRITING soon. Where was your battle with Avatar again, Neb?

Thank you Sorcerer Alex
I certainly hope so, Mouse I'd like being an author as a job, although it's probably hard to live off

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Sapphire Dragoness of ALSB
Waitress at Cloudy's Cafe
Guardian of the Temple of Aerie (specialized in GenCon and BG)
Magess of Lady Lioness' Court
Historian of IW
Most Illustrious Arch-Magess of the Illuminati
Lux omnis est
Once Upon A Paper Writer's Forum

[This message has been edited by Kaz (edited 10-08-2001).]

[Neb]

Originally posted by Kaz: We're still in the note stage - copying and pasting all threads that pertain to the subject. Hopefully we can start actually WRITING soon. Where was your battle with Avatar again, Neb?

It started when I stole the statue, Seph and you chased me through the ORT building, I then went to the HADB area where I locked myself away in my floating castle and Avatar then attacked me that's were we are now, in the HADB thread.

[Kaz]

Mind if I join?

[Silver Cheetah]

Originally posted by Kaz: Sorry, guys, was away for a bit. SC, I'd *love* you to do that.

Ok, will be happy to do very light edit (doesn't need much at all) to the first draft! Some time in the next few days...



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Most Ecstatic and Exotic Mistress of the Illuminati

Kaz, I think you did an excellent job. It's very well thought out and I can't wait until the next installment.

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