06-24-2001, 07:06 PM | #41 |
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If
If I stayed beneath the steady drip, drip of slowly falling acid rain until my silent, hollow soul dissolved away ... would you even notice? ------------------ There is only one kiwidoc, accept no substitutes STANDARD OPERATING PROCEEDURE www.judyhope.co.uk [This message has been edited by kiwidoc (edited 06-24-2001).] |
06-24-2001, 07:59 PM | #42 |
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kiwidoc... evoking a very focused and concentrated piece of emotion there. Excellent. Keep them coming people.
oh and...*bump* |
06-24-2001, 08:13 PM | #43 |
Ra
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Musphel feelings,
like ants on an old plum tree, Infinite string. |
06-24-2001, 10:29 PM | #44 |
Ma'at - Goddess of Truth & Justice
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Almost sounds like Haiku, Djinn
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06-24-2001, 10:50 PM | #45 | |
Ra
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Quote:
I can't remember correctly if it's 5 syllables, then 7, then 5. But this is how I do it. Yes, even though I might sometimes throw in the extra syllable here and there...artistic licence baby! |
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06-25-2001, 10:17 AM | #46 |
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kiwidoc, you have summarized a poem of mine that is very long!
fragments of my humanity scattered shattered into pieces the naked eye could not see taken by someone else stolen from me i feel my very self dissolving into thin air as i try to regain my soul it is all but too late shit.. that needs a lot of work.. anyway, just wanted to bump it sorta ------------------ Yukishiro Tomoe |
06-25-2001, 10:32 PM | #47 |
Ma'at - Goddess of Truth & Justice
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Bumping for Ryan, et. al.
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06-29-2001, 09:20 AM | #48 |
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written together with "My Shoelaces and More", inspired by the very lively (yawn) speaker.
SLOW DEATH The voice drones on and on On and on Like the pesky buzzing of the bees Buzzing in your ear You can’t do anything but try to live with it And slowly get annoyed Frustrated The mind tries to fly away With the clouds that seem to have nowhere to go The eyes focus on some poor inanimate object That if it could talk would say “Take a picture. It lasts longer.” Inevitably we’re back to the voice The voice that drones And drones In meaningless monotone Until you decide To just die a slow death Death by boredom Oh yeah... bump bump ba-dump |
06-29-2001, 01:26 PM | #49 |
Iron Throne Cult
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hey! speaking of a slow death, have you heard something about the abu sayaf on how the decapitate the guy?
they make the guy sorta lie down, then they will step on the head and start sawing the head off!!!! I HOPE THAT IS NOT TRUE, but in this part of the world, high tech equipment doesnt exist, and with their funding, how do you think they would cut the persons head off? jesus... ------------------ Yukishiro Tomoe |
06-29-2001, 04:10 PM | #50 |
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Sorry i havent been on much, moving house, school etc... been stealing all my time online , so heres a little poem i wrote to let you know how i felt without all you guys! Lonleliness (sp) Here amongst these faceless statues, You wander, all alone, Here amonst the other casulties, From the darkest dreads you've sown. In and out there empty presence, You wander, all alone, Trapped with only the swirling shadows, Of your isolation, that has grown. Running from their pleading hands, You wander, all alone Fleeing from their motionless lips, Which emit a heartless groan. Here amongst these wraith-like figures, You wander, all alone, With only the tiniest spark of freedom lurking, Hidden deep yet never shown. Running from their peircing eyes, You wander, all alone Judged by these uncaring eyes, By pupils, set in stone. Trapped within this stony prison, With fear worse than you've ever known, Confined with only these mocking statues, To forever wander...all alone. ------------------ Jerome, Chairperson Of The International Fluffy Hunting Society |
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