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Old 03-29-2001, 09:05 PM   #1
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hey all I am not much of a novelist but some of you are and any closure to
this piece I started would be nice I made it for my wife and I thought it would
be neat to e-mail it to her kinda on a romantic thingy so here it is if anyone
would like to add to it for me that would be neat if not thats cool to

I find myself gasping lowering myself slowly into the gaping
Bedrock hole pure blackness permiates out from within the crevis.
If it were not for the Magical blade dangling from my waist I
would not be able to see one foot in front of mine own eyes.
The odor overwhelms my senses 20ft into the black canyon,and
the true nature of it's evilness becomes more than a reality.
The smell is thickening and the odor of dead corpses rushes me as
an onslaugth of images of former beasts I have battled fall way short
of this deed that lays before me this day. For I know my failure
means certain destruction of the land, and the loss of my true love
"Lady Cher" This will not happen I assure myself! "my blade will be quick
and true on this day"..

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Old 03-29-2001, 09:08 PM   #2
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Originally posted by sirgwayne:
hey all I am not much of a novelist but some of you are and any closure to
this piece I started would be nice I made it for my wife and I thought it would
be neat to e-mail it to her kinda on a romantic thingy so here it is if anyone
would like to add to it for me that would be neat if not thats cool to

I find myself gasping lowering myself slowly into the gaping
Bedrock hole pure blackness permiates out from within the crevis.
If it were not for the Magical blade dangling from my waist I
would not be able to see one foot in front of mine own eyes.
The odor overwhelms my senses 20ft into the black canyon,and
the true nature of it's evilness becomes more than a reality.
The smell is thickening and the odor of dead corpses rushes me as
an onslaugth of images of former beasts I have battled fall way short
of this deed that lays before me this day. For I know my failure
means certain destruction of the land, and the loss of my true love
"Lady Cher" This will not happen I assure myself! "my blade will be quick
and true on this day"..


You want this pretty short, or does it not matter? I can get about 2 chapters out of it for right now, maybe 3.


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Old 03-29-2001, 09:11 PM   #3
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don't really matter do it up my friend!

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Old 03-29-2001, 09:15 PM   #4
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Hate to ask you for a little work my friend, but it will help the story. How would you define your lady? What class/race and relation is she to you? Anything you can input will help make for a much cleaner translation.

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Old 03-29-2001, 09:19 PM   #5
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She would be human my Queen to be and I would be along the lines of Palidin/or
knight.
 
Old 03-29-2001, 09:22 PM   #6
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She would be human my Queen to be and I would be along the lines of Palidin/or
knight.

What's the timeframe that you would like this done by? Also any specific characteristics of the lady or yourself would help as well. Color of eyes, hair, any distinguishing features (if this isn't important, then just bluff it off, but I thought it would add a nice touch of realism and forethought to the piece. )
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Old 03-29-2001, 09:59 PM   #7
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tobbin let me get back with the details on the individuals ok.your right that
would inhance the actual characters give me about a day.. and you could possibly
fill in the details.
 
Old 03-29-2001, 11:03 PM   #8
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tobbin let me get back with the details on the individuals ok.your right that
would inhance the actual characters give me about a day.. and you could possibly
fill in the details.
Sure, no prob, just wanting to help you make it purrty cool. Please post in here though. I will add a link so I can find it easy.

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