Fragments of Humanity, Sanctuary II - Page 15

Grand-Ranger · 08-17-2001, 11:14 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Bahamut:
Dream

When my eyes close for oblivion's sake
My stressed mind leaps
Into this faraway Holy land
That is called dreams

They shape your future,
Relish pasts
It's soft and billowy touches
Leave you sweaty and in pain, but not

When morn comes and we awaken
Our mind clears and hearts ache
On where reality creeps back
Toward the unguarded thoughts

Pain strikes, amplified by loneliness

So, let us all dream
Dream of whatever
Let our dreams shape us
Build us, and be with us forvever...

Let us all keep on dreaming...

Just wanted to share that in form of a poem...

Wow that was awsome Ryan. I am currently engaged in writing a song on the same sub-ject, Its not quite done yet

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So if in the forest look behind you, because that where the ranger is going to be

Djinn Raffo · 08-18-2001, 06:34 AM

UpDownLoveRight
NowInMyHeadn'Heart
YesIt'sNow

Gabe · 08-18-2001, 08:08 AM

Beautiful works people, truly. I hope you don't mind if I add one of my own.

Popular Girl.

Last night I dreamt,
of holding you,
moving with the moonlight,
dancing, swaying, playing,
in that blessed night,
but then you left,
staying just within sight,
I shouted and waved to bring you near,
but you could not, would not hear,
unable to see me,
forever out of reach.

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Bahamut · 08-18-2001, 08:09 AM

Thank you guys! Heehee!

Hmm... Djinn... weird but I like it? Is this another form of haiku? Haiku is 7 syllables and 4 lines right? Or was that another?

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My love for her is beyond words... beyond time... you know this

Bahamut · 08-18-2001, 08:15 AM

Damn Gabe.. that was great!

Welcome to IW!

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My love for her is beyond words... beyond time... you know this

Gabe · 08-18-2001, 08:21 AM

Thanks for the welcome Bahamut but it's not nessisty, really! Nice to see you still creating poemsby the way, even if they are still some what dark.

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[This message has been edited by Gabe (edited 08-18-2001).]

Bahamut · 08-18-2001, 08:51 AM

So, so.. Gabriel? Is that you?

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My love for her is beyond words... beyond time... you know this

Gabe · 08-18-2001, 09:18 AM

In spirit if not name. hmmm.....

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We are not the man that was,
we are those who will be,
changed by times and deeds,
always moving forwards,
towards the future me.

[This message has been edited by Gabe (edited 08-18-2001).]

Bahamut · 08-18-2001, 09:23 AM

Okay... nevermind... welcome back then!

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My love for her is beyond words... beyond time... you know this

Jerome · 08-18-2001, 09:29 AM

Ehh...... have i missed something?

Great poem BTW Gabe!

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08-18-2001, 06:34 AM	#142
Djinn Raffo Ra Join Date: March 11, 2001 Location: Ant Hill Age: 49 Posts: 2,397	UpDownLoveRight NowInMyHeadn'Heart YesIt'sNow

08-18-2001, 08:08 AM	#143
Gabe Elite Waterdeep Guard Join Date: August 17, 2001 Location: Milton Keynes Posts: 41	Beautiful works people, truly. I hope you don't mind if I add one of my own. Popular Girl. Last night I dreamt, of holding you, moving with the moonlight, dancing, swaying, playing, in that blessed night, but then you left, staying just within sight, I shouted and waved to bring you near, but you could not, would not hear, unable to see me, forever out of reach. ------------------

08-18-2001, 08:09 AM	#144
Bahamut Iron Throne Cult Join Date: March 12, 2001 Location: Manila, Philippines Age: 39 Posts: 4,864	Thank you guys! Heehee! Hmm... Djinn... weird but I like it? Is this another form of haiku? Haiku is 7 syllables and 4 lines right? Or was that another? ------------------ My love for her is beyond words... beyond time... you know this

08-18-2001, 08:15 AM	#145
Bahamut Iron Throne Cult Join Date: March 12, 2001 Location: Manila, Philippines Age: 39 Posts: 4,864	Damn Gabe.. that was great! Welcome to IW! ------------------ My love for her is beyond words... beyond time... you know this

08-18-2001, 08:21 AM	#146
Gabe Elite Waterdeep Guard Join Date: August 17, 2001 Location: Milton Keynes Posts: 41	Thanks for the welcome Bahamut but it's not nessisty, really! Nice to see you still creating poemsby the way, even if they are still some what dark. ------------------ [This message has been edited by Gabe (edited 08-18-2001).]

08-18-2001, 08:51 AM	#147
Bahamut Iron Throne Cult Join Date: March 12, 2001 Location: Manila, Philippines Age: 39 Posts: 4,864	So, so.. Gabriel? Is that you? ------------------ My love for her is beyond words... beyond time... you know this

08-18-2001, 09:18 AM	#148
Gabe Elite Waterdeep Guard Join Date: August 17, 2001 Location: Milton Keynes Posts: 41	In spirit if not name. hmmm..... ------------------ We are not the man that was, we are those who will be, changed by times and deeds, always moving forwards, towards the future me. [This message has been edited by Gabe (edited 08-18-2001).]

08-18-2001, 09:23 AM	#149
Bahamut Iron Throne Cult Join Date: March 12, 2001 Location: Manila, Philippines Age: 39 Posts: 4,864	Okay... nevermind... welcome back then! ------------------ My love for her is beyond words... beyond time... you know this

08-18-2001, 09:29 AM	#150
Jerome Knight of the Rose Join Date: January 8, 2001 Location: Scotland Age: 38 Posts: 4,418	Ehh...... have i missed something? Great poem BTW Gabe! ------------------

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