Your thoughts wanted

Charlak The Axeman · 10-18-2002, 06:27 PM

What do you think of my signature?

NobleNick · 10-23-2002, 03:46 PM

Charlak,

Heh, heh, heh. Nice characterization for a dwarf.

Check your punctuation and capitalization. (I think a period, instead of a comma, before the word "before" would help things flow better.) Also, you misspelled Psybeznia's "friend" (or, heh, heh, did you mean to say "fiend"?)

pritchke · 10-23-2002, 04:16 PM

"Grab my arm and I'll cut your hand off before you can grab my beard. Remember I'm a Dwarf!"

I would have written it something like this although I am no English major and really shouldn't be checking anyone's grammar. My spelling is notoriously bad in most of my posts. Maybe placing it in quotes or something as well. Other than that it is a cool sig for a dwarf.

Charlak The Axeman · 10-23-2002, 05:23 PM

Thanks

Charlak The Axeman · 10-23-2002, 05:26 PM

Should be dont now

pritchke · 10-23-2002, 06:41 PM

Much better, and I do like the ... pause.

10-18-2002, 06:27 PM	#1
Charlak The Axeman The Magister Join Date: September 26, 2002 Location: A little house in a small place I call the World Age: 35 Posts: 111	What do you think of my signature? __________________ Psybeznia\'s Friend and Front Line Fighter, Master of the Axe, The Dwarf - Charlak. Grab my arm and i\'ll cut your hand off, before you grab my beard...remember i\'m a Dwarf

10-23-2002, 05:23 PM	#4
Charlak The Axeman The Magister Join Date: September 26, 2002 Location: A little house in a small place I call the World Age: 35 Posts: 111	Thanks __________________ Psybeznia\'s Friend and Front Line Fighter, Master of the Axe, The Dwarf - Charlak. Grab my arm and i\'ll cut your hand off, before you grab my beard...remember i\'m a Dwarf

10-23-2002, 05:26 PM	#5
Charlak The Axeman The Magister Join Date: September 26, 2002 Location: A little house in a small place I call the World Age: 35 Posts: 111	Should be dont now __________________ Psybeznia\'s Friend and Front Line Fighter, Master of the Axe, The Dwarf - Charlak. Grab my arm and i\'ll cut your hand off, before you grab my beard...remember i\'m a Dwarf

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10-23-2002, 03:46 PM	#2
NobleNick Quintesson Join Date: February 5, 2002 Location: Huntsville, AL, USA Age: 63 Posts: 1,045	Charlak, Heh, heh, heh. Nice characterization for a dwarf. Check your punctuation and capitalization. (I think a period, instead of a comma, before the word "before" would help things flow better.) Also, you misspelled Psybeznia's "friend" (or, heh, heh, did you mean to say "fiend"?)

10-23-2002, 04:16 PM	#3
pritchke Bastet - Egyptian Cat Goddess Join Date: September 5, 2001 Location: Calgary, AB Age: 49 Posts: 3,491	"Grab my arm and I'll cut your hand off before you can grab my beard. Remember I'm a Dwarf!" I would have written it something like this although I am no English major and really shouldn't be checking anyone's grammar. My spelling is notoriously bad in most of my posts. Maybe placing it in quotes or something as well. Other than that it is a cool sig for a dwarf.

10-23-2002, 06:41 PM	#6
pritchke Bastet - Egyptian Cat Goddess Join Date: September 5, 2001 Location: Calgary, AB Age: 49 Posts: 3,491	Much better, and I do like the ... pause.

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