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06-11-2002, 10:55 PM
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Ma'at - Goddess of Truth & Justice
 Join Date: September 5, 2001
Location: House of Freelight
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For those who haven't read this before and would care to comment on it
 Page by page she reads them through Funny what the past can do Memories jolted from within Dwelling in them seems a sin Lingering over every word Knowing she must look absurd Eyes remain engrossed by them Hard against her heart they ram Breathing hard to ward off woe Shakes her head to fight her foe Sighing, closing eyes to rest Limits now put to the test Letters, diaries now perused Pain from scar-free wounds then oozed Reaching out to fetch the bin Careful not to make a din Scissors poised to make the cut Hearing soundless cries of "But..." Gritting teeth, she lifts a page Conscious of the sacrilege What if regret should haunt her? Wincing at the soft murmur Shreds them in a thoughtless daze No more does she at them gaze Aching hands seek brief respite Fingers now rent on with spite Burden lifts as hours pass Could she be a happier lass? Freed from death grip of the past Now it's time to steer the mast Present, future seem more gay Time to face a brand new day. |
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06-11-2002, 11:02 PM
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Mephistopheles
 Join Date: January 18, 2002
Location: Baumholder Germany
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interesting, i will have to send that to some friends
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An Army of fun. <br />  <br />\"The worst thing about being in Germany in the Army is having to wakeup everyday\" <img border=\"0\" title=\"\" alt=\"[Wink]\" src=\"wink.gif\" />
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06-11-2002, 11:03 PM
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Ma'at - Goddess of Truth & Justice
Join Date: September 5, 2001
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Mind telling me why, dizzy?
 Just curious... [img]graemlins/1ponder.gif[/img]
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06-11-2002, 11:04 PM
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Jack Burton
 Join Date: March 31, 2001
Location: The zephyr lands beneath the brine.
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It's very... Mistral. I can see who wrote it
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06-11-2002, 11:06 PM
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Mephistopheles
Join Date: January 18, 2002
Location: Baumholder Germany
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i picture lost love in it or a lost lover its very good.
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An Army of fun. <br /> <br />\"The worst thing about being in Germany in the Army is having to wakeup everyday\" <img border=\"0\" title=\"\" alt=\"[Wink]\" src=\"wink.gif\" />
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06-11-2002, 11:11 PM
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Ma'at - Goddess of Truth & Justice
Join Date: September 5, 2001
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Oh wow, now I can't escape Legolas' detection [img]graemlins/biglaugh.gif[/img]
Thanks, dizzy [img]smile.gif[/img] I did go through that, and it certainly wasn't easy
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06-11-2002, 11:29 PM
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Mephistopheles
Join Date: January 18, 2002
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i see. Sorry about that.
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An Army of fun. <br /> <br />\"The worst thing about being in Germany in the Army is having to wakeup everyday\" <img border=\"0\" title=\"\" alt=\"[Wink]\" src=\"wink.gif\" />
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06-11-2002, 11:34 PM
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Ma'at - Goddess of Truth & Justice
Join Date: September 5, 2001
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No worries, dizzy [img]smile.gif[/img] Writing actually helped to get it out of my system and anyway, I should move on after such a long time
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06-11-2002, 11:45 PM
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Horus - Egyptian Sky God
 Join Date: March 4, 2001
Location: either CA or MO
Age: 42
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doh, I knew you wrote it too,
it is just the elf had first chance. but anyways, thats so wonderful, Mistral, glad that you had come to terms with the past, it is a soul-lifting experience once you are free of it. nevertheless, it guides your future. well, good job my friend.and a wonderful poem it is |
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06-12-2002, 12:39 AM
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Ma'at - Goddess of Truth & Justice
Join Date: September 5, 2001
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Thank you, 250
Have a good time yourself and see you around [img]graemlins/happywave.gif[/img]
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