Chapt. 1 of a story by me - comments please! - Page 3

adam warlock · 10-08-2001, 08:41 PM

very good
just a little more on the description on the characters and you're on the roll

good job with the room

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HEY! get away from my homepage!!
You know who and what I am... what are you going to do about it?

10-09-2001, 12:44 PM

This is simply a very respectful bumping of sorts. As you can plainly see, I am new and am unsure of the bumping techniques used by the lords and ladies of this wondrous forum. I can guess that a simple word of "bump" would be insufficient for this task inasmuch as the topic and content of this specific thread are quite meaningful. I would encourage the masses to read and comment with appropriate kudos to the author of the short story. Please don't misconstrue my attempt at bumping as "spam" because I did not insert a smiley face or just a single word. I guess, as a "newbie" I tend to quote too much and am fearful of bludgeoning of the newbies. I don't know if you have that habit or holiday on this board. In fact, what I don't know about this board and its inhabitants could fill a virtual library. I beg permission to request forgiveness for not abiding by the newbie rule of being "seen and not heard".
I will commence the self-flaggelation immediately for being so very self deprecating and wordy.

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"I know that you believe you understand what you think I said, but I'm not sure you realize that what you heard is not what I meant."
-Robert McCloskey

DragonMage · 10-09-2001, 12:58 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by H. Sedai:
This is simply a very respectful bumping of sorts. As you can plainly see, I am new and am unsure of the bumping techniques used by the lords and ladies of this wondrous forum. I can guess that a simple word of "bump" would be insufficient for this task inasmuch as the topic and content of this specific thread are quite meaningful. I would encourage the masses to read and comment with appropriate kudos to the author of the short story. Please don't misconstrue my attempt at bumping as "spam" because I did not insert a smiley face or just a single word. I guess, as a "newbie" I tend to quote too much and am fearful of bludgeoning of the newbies. I don't know if you have that habit or holiday on this board. In fact, what I don't know about this board and its inhabitants could fill a virtual library. I beg permission to request forgiveness for not abiding by the newbie rule of being "seen and not heard".
I will commence the self-flaggelation immediately for being so very self deprecating and wordy.

Oh, my! I don't know whether to laugh or be impressed!

You will definitely fit in nicely here!

And if I haven't said it yet: WELCOME!!!!

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Alureth...Dragon friend of Breanna, Mage and Advisor in the Court of Lady Lioness

Co-Owner/Operator of the Evil Petting Zoo and devout member of the HADB clan.
Commander of the Dragon Fleet, IW Peacekeeping Force
Sublime Sister of the Illuminati - may the Light shine forever!
Second Historian and Scribe of IW. Mother Hen of IW.
Mage extraordinair, Pin-Up Girl for the OLD-COOTS
Magey-Wagey: performer in the Nekked Dancing Trio of the ORT.

Hopeless Romantic *sigh*

Mirac Honorguard · 10-09-2001, 05:03 PM

Why don't I get that much replies on my story.......guess it wasn't as good as yours (*trying to motivate people into reading my story*)

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http://www.angelfire.com/rpg2/mirac
I'd be Mirac, mighty mage of er... uhm.. er.. - Mirac Honorguard
Fellow Table Dancer of the Jerome's Table dancer group
Spell formulater of the IW peace-keeping force
Magical advisor of MiLady Lioness

DragonMage · 10-09-2001, 05:06 PM

Awww, Mirac, honey....bump it up for us. Some of us may not have seen it if other topics bumped over it fast enough. I've had more than one of my threads 'drown'...

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Alureth...Dragon friend of Breanna, Mage and Advisor in the Court of Lady Lioness

Co-Owner/Operator of the Evil Petting Zoo and devout member of the HADB clan.
Commander of the Dragon Fleet, IW Peacekeeping Force
Sublime Sister of the Illuminati - may the Light shine forever!
Second Historian and Scribe of IW. Mother Hen of IW.
Mage extraordinair, Pin-Up Girl for the OLD-COOTS
Magey-Wagey: performer in the Nekked Dancing Trio of the ORT.

Hopeless Romantic *sigh*

10-09-2001, 05:28 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by DragonMage:
Awww, Mirac, honey....bump it up for us. Some of us may not have seen it if other topics bumped over it fast enough. I've had more than one of my threads 'drown'...

Aww.... who could ignore one of your threads?

I find them always so interesting and memorable.... you're certainly among the more intelligent posters on this forum

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Formidable Flirty Fishy Sorcerer of the HADB

DragonMage · 10-09-2001, 06:04 PM

Well, thank you for the unexpected compliment, Alex.

Gee, I feel like I have a fan base now. *giggle*

Did I just GIGGLE???

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Alureth...Dragon friend of Breanna, Mage and Advisor in the Court of Lady Lioness

Co-Owner/Operator of the Evil Petting Zoo and devout member of the HADB clan.
Commander of the Dragon Fleet, IW Peacekeeping Force
Sublime Sister of the Illuminati - may the Light shine forever!
Second Historian and Scribe of IW. Mother Hen of IW.
Mage extraordinair, Pin-Up Girl for the OLD-COOTS
Magey-Wagey: performer in the Nekked Dancing Trio of the ORT.

Hopeless Romantic *sigh*

Elif Godson · 10-09-2001, 09:31 PM

Lining up for the swing, he keep's his eye on the target....whack he bump's the
page outta the park

By the by Kaz, excelent story. You and a few other member's should get together
and start up a company.

[This message has been edited by Elif Godson (edited 10-09-2001).]

Killing Spree · 10-09-2001, 09:38 PM

GO KAZ!!!

~claps, cheers, and overall makes a fool of herself trying to encourage Kaz.~

OH THE HORROR! Somebody better than me! AGGGHHH! I'M MELTING!

10-10-2001, 11:49 AM

Once again, I would like to bump this thread so every Tom, Dick, and Dragonmage may view it's contents. Let me also take this opportunity to apologize to Kaz for thinking of a minotaur every time I type her nickname. I am one of many who were fans of the Dragonlance series of books and games. I was quite enamored with the idea of the Solamnic knights and loved to slay the Sivaks, Kapaks, and Bozaks. I've noticed that I am mostly invisible on this forum, and its okay? Why? "Because I'm good enough, I'm smart enough, and doggonit, people like me."

Each of you are still welcome to read the story and comment positively upon it. To ignore it would be the wrong thing to do. We all want to do the right thing in this matter. We should support all of the aspiring authors. They have a gift that the rest of us covet. Think back when R.A. Salvatore first started. He probably wrote a short story about an elf dude who was misunderstood and only his kitty liked him. Did his thread fall to page 4? I don't think so.

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"I know that you believe you understand what you think I said, but I'm not sure you realize that what you heard is not what I meant."
-Robert McCloskey

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10-08-2001, 08:41 PM	#21
adam warlock Ma'at - Goddess of Truth & Justice Join Date: January 7, 2001 Location: I live inside of my mind..... Age: 53 Posts: 3,234	very good just a little more on the description on the characters and you're on the roll good job with the room ------------------ HEY! get away from my homepage!! You know who and what I am... what are you going to do about it?

10-09-2001, 12:44 PM	#22
H. Sedai Guest Posts: n/a	This is simply a very respectful bumping of sorts. As you can plainly see, I am new and am unsure of the bumping techniques used by the lords and ladies of this wondrous forum. I can guess that a simple word of "bump" would be insufficient for this task inasmuch as the topic and content of this specific thread are quite meaningful. I would encourage the masses to read and comment with appropriate kudos to the author of the short story. Please don't misconstrue my attempt at bumping as "spam" because I did not insert a smiley face or just a single word. I guess, as a "newbie" I tend to quote too much and am fearful of bludgeoning of the newbies. I don't know if you have that habit or holiday on this board. In fact, what I don't know about this board and its inhabitants could fill a virtual library. I beg permission to request forgiveness for not abiding by the newbie rule of being "seen and not heard". I will commence the self-flaggelation immediately for being so very self deprecating and wordy. ------------------ "I know that you believe you understand what you think I said, but I'm not sure you realize that what you heard is not what I meant." -Robert McCloskey

10-09-2001, 05:03 PM	#24
Mirac Honorguard Red Wizard of Thay Join Date: August 21, 2001 Location: Limburg, Netherlands, Europe Age: 42 Posts: 894	Why don't I get that much replies on my story.......guess it wasn't as good as yours (trying to motivate people into reading my story) ------------------ http://www.angelfire.com/rpg2/mirac I'd be Mirac, mighty mage of er... uhm.. er.. - Mirac Honorguard Fellow Table Dancer of the Jerome's Table dancer group Spell formulater of the IW peace-keeping force Magical advisor of MiLady Lioness

10-09-2001, 05:06 PM	#25
DragonMage 20th Level Warrior Join Date: September 6, 2001 Location: The lighter side of life, a.k.a. Newnan, Georgia Age: 55 Posts: 2,767	Awww, Mirac, honey....bump it up for us. Some of us may not have seen it if other topics bumped over it fast enough. I've had more than one of my threads 'drown'... ------------------ Alureth...Dragon friend of Breanna, Mage and Advisor in the Court of Lady Lioness Co-Owner/Operator of the Evil Petting Zoo and devout member of the HADB clan. Commander of the Dragon Fleet, IW Peacekeeping Force Sublime Sister of the Illuminati - may the Light shine forever! Second Historian and Scribe of IW. Mother Hen of IW. Mage extraordinair, Pin-Up Girl for the OLD-COOTS Magey-Wagey: performer in the Nekked Dancing Trio of the ORT. Hopeless Romantic sigh

10-09-2001, 06:04 PM	#27
DragonMage 20th Level Warrior Join Date: September 6, 2001 Location: The lighter side of life, a.k.a. Newnan, Georgia Age: 55 Posts: 2,767	Well, thank you for the unexpected compliment, Alex. Gee, I feel like I have a fan base now. giggle Did I just GIGGLE??? ------------------ Alureth...Dragon friend of Breanna, Mage and Advisor in the Court of Lady Lioness Co-Owner/Operator of the Evil Petting Zoo and devout member of the HADB clan. Commander of the Dragon Fleet, IW Peacekeeping Force Sublime Sister of the Illuminati - may the Light shine forever! Second Historian and Scribe of IW. Mother Hen of IW. Mage extraordinair, Pin-Up Girl for the OLD-COOTS Magey-Wagey: performer in the Nekked Dancing Trio of the ORT. Hopeless Romantic sigh

10-09-2001, 09:31 PM	#28
Elif Godson Dracolich Join Date: August 28, 2001 Location: Hurricane Valley Age: 51 Posts: 3,089	Lining up for the swing, he keep's his eye on the target....whack he bump's the page outta the park By the by Kaz, excelent story. You and a few other member's should get together and start up a company. [This message has been edited by Elif Godson (edited 10-09-2001).]

10-09-2001, 09:38 PM	#29
Killing Spree Mephistopheles Join Date: July 11, 2001 Location: The Ashes Age: 36 Posts: 1,427	GO KAZ!!! ~claps, cheers, and overall makes a fool of herself trying to encourage Kaz.~ OH THE HORROR! Somebody better than me! AGGGHHH! I'M MELTING!

10-10-2001, 11:49 AM	#30
H. Sedai Guest Posts: n/a	Once again, I would like to bump this thread so every Tom, Dick, and Dragonmage may view it's contents. Let me also take this opportunity to apologize to Kaz for thinking of a minotaur every time I type her nickname. I am one of many who were fans of the Dragonlance series of books and games. I was quite enamored with the idea of the Solamnic knights and loved to slay the Sivaks, Kapaks, and Bozaks. I've noticed that I am mostly invisible on this forum, and its okay? Why? "Because I'm good enough, I'm smart enough, and doggonit, people like me." Each of you are still welcome to read the story and comment positively upon it. To ignore it would be the wrong thing to do. We all want to do the right thing in this matter. We should support all of the aspiring authors. They have a gift that the rest of us covet. Think back when R.A. Salvatore first started. He probably wrote a short story about an elf dude who was misunderstood and only his kitty liked him. Did his thread fall to page 4? I don't think so. ------------------ "I know that you believe you understand what you think I said, but I'm not sure you realize that what you heard is not what I meant." -Robert McCloskey

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