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Old 05-19-2004, 05:44 PM   #1
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..My very first submission.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/7403995/
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Old 05-19-2004, 06:26 PM   #2
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amazing....really, good

but you still could do better...

the nose is too high, the face is too circular

and the hair is too light :-p

it'd be awesome!
not that it isn't right now!!
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Old 05-19-2004, 06:36 PM   #3
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cool, I like it. my only comment would be the nose, needs a bit of work. Also great choice of paper to draw it on

Apart from that, great!
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Old 05-20-2004, 02:03 AM   #4
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Ok, I'll work on it when I get back from school(15-20 hours later)
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Old 05-20-2004, 09:24 AM   #5
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So, I'm back! I forgot to say thanks for the comments!

Hehhe, the paper is a page from my Geography notebook.

I'll try to change the nose and darken the hair to see how it works out. [img]smile.gif[/img]

What do you mean exactly, by the face being too circular? You mean that the head should be longer?

By the way, I personally, am not interested in modifying artwork with Photoshop, so I draw only by hand.
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Old 05-20-2004, 11:57 AM   #6
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Heey, submission done!

I narrowed the nose, making it have a less 'pointy' feel, darkened the hair and made it longer in some parts, darkened the eyebrows and dark stuff under the eyes(which were barely noticable before), redrew the bones under the neck, sharpened the eyes, made the neck-touching part of the kimono tippy, and did some other changes also. [img]smile.gif[/img]

You can look at them both at once to compare them. Anyway, here it is:

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/7423191/

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Old 05-20-2004, 12:44 PM   #7
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Good. Great!
Eagerly expecting more...
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Old 05-23-2004, 08:29 PM   #8
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The hair is the best!
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Old 06-06-2004, 11:50 PM   #9
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He looks a little frazzled. Is it a windy day there? Looks good. [img]smile.gif[/img]
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