i wrote a story (a while back)

SSJ4Sephiroth · 09-14-2001, 12:34 AM

hey people, im bored and decided to give you guys a link to a story i wrote a few months ago.

WARNING: THE FOLLOWING LINK CONTAINS SOME EXPLICIT MATERIAL. PLEASE PROCEED AT YOUR OWN RISK! AL, AC, AS, V

Note#1: if the link does not take you directly to the story, go to the Stories link on the menu bar, then click the middle one. my penname for that site is Seifer(SR)

Note#2: do NOT go to any other links on that site, ESPECIALLY the forum! if you think my book is bad your skin may peel off when you see the forum!

so heres the link! enjoy! at yer own risk, of course...

http://www.geocities.com/lance_sv/

EDIT: hey, tell me what you think! i may use the input for a sequel im writing for it, which may become a source of income if enough people like it...
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It's simple. Once the Planet is hurt, it gathers Spirit Energy to heal the injury. The amount of energy gathered depends on the size of the injury...What would happen if there was an injury that threatened the very life of the Planet? Think how much energy would be gathered! Ha, ha, ha. And at the center of that injury, wil be me. All that boundless energy will be mine. By merging with the energy of the Planet, I will be come a new life form, a new existence. Melding with the Planet, I will cease to exist as I am now. Only to be reborn as a 'God' to rule over every living soul.

Super Sephiroth, slayer of the Uber Fluffy, and battle co-ordionator and defender of the HADB clan.

Diplomacy is all and well, but HADB is better!

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Aelia Jusa · 09-14-2001, 12:51 AM

Hmmmm. I didn't read it all, but I think I got the general gist. Did they end up getting married? And where did the inspiration for that "this light makes your hair look pretty" line come from? Shades of Aerie and Jaheira I think

. Plus I went to the forum. Do you hate me? That sadmucko seemed a bit of a fool.

SSJ4Sephiroth · 09-14-2001, 02:30 AM

well, yes, to the first questions. but the third one... no. im perfectly fine with you people going to the forum there, its just not reccommended because i actually rate it NC-17 (if you go back far enough theres actually stuff worse than swearing.) and that sadmucko guy... im trying to show him the ways of IronWorks, but he resists as his nature is flaming. hes not very well liked by the others, and was actually banned from the forum twice! oh well... its a long story. probably shoudla put more time in it tho... i had a 1 chapter per day quota back then, didnt allow for much time to be put into story planning

.

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It's simple. Once the Planet is hurt, it gathers Spirit Energy to heal the injury. The amount of energy gathered depends on the size of the injury...What would happen if there was an injury that threatened the very life of the Planet? Think how much energy would be gathered! Ha, ha, ha. And at the center of that injury, wil be me. All that boundless energy will be mine. By merging with the energy of the Planet, I will be come a new life form, a new existence. Melding with the Planet, I will cease to exist as I am now. Only to be reborn as a 'God' to rule over every living soul.

Super Sephiroth, slayer of the Uber Fluffy, and battle co-ordionator and defender of the HADB clan.

Diplomacy is all and well, but HADB is better!

SSJ4Sephiroth · 09-14-2001, 02:59 PM

hmm... people, i seriously want your opinions!

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It's simple. Once the Planet is hurt, it gathers Spirit Energy to heal the injury. The amount of energy gathered depends on the size of the injury...What would happen if there was an injury that threatened the very life of the Planet? Think how much energy would be gathered! Ha, ha, ha. And at the center of that injury, wil be me. All that boundless energy will be mine. By merging with the energy of the Planet, I will be come a new life form, a new existence. Melding with the Planet, I will cease to exist as I am now. Only to be reborn as a 'God' to rule over every living soul.

Super Sephiroth, slayer of the Uber Fluffy, and battle co-ordionator and defender of the HADB clan.

Diplomacy is all and well, but HADB is better!

09-14-2001, 03:04 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by SSJ4Sephiroth:
hmm... people, i seriously want your opinions!

Went to the link but it just put me on your web page, didn't have toime to look all around for it. If you had a link directly to it, that would help.

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Disintigration is easy, If you really want to impress me, ReIntegrate it.

SSJ4Sephiroth · 09-14-2001, 03:07 PM

i cant link directly to it, its on a subsite. the webmaster is too lazy to get separatie sites

. but i posted directions... go to Stories on the sidebar, then click on the middle one that was written by Seifer(SR).

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It's simple. Once the Planet is hurt, it gathers Spirit Energy to heal the injury. The amount of energy gathered depends on the size of the injury...What would happen if there was an injury that threatened the very life of the Planet? Think how much energy would be gathered! Ha, ha, ha. And at the center of that injury, wil be me. All that boundless energy will be mine. By merging with the energy of the Planet, I will be come a new life form, a new existence. Melding with the Planet, I will cease to exist as I am now. Only to be reborn as a 'God' to rule over every living soul.

Super Sephiroth, slayer of the Uber Fluffy, and battle co-ordionator and defender of the HADB clan.

Diplomacy is all and well, but HADB is better!

SSJ4Sephiroth · 09-14-2001, 05:44 PM

hmm people, i need your honest opinions about this writing!

does it make you

from wanting more, or

from braindead stupidity or something?

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It's simple. Once the Planet is hurt, it gathers Spirit Energy to heal the injury. The amount of energy gathered depends on the size of the injury...What would happen if there was an injury that threatened the very life of the Planet? Think how much energy would be gathered! Ha, ha, ha. And at the center of that injury, wil be me. All that boundless energy will be mine. By merging with the energy of the Planet, I will be come a new life form, a new existence. Melding with the Planet, I will cease to exist as I am now. Only to be reborn as a 'God' to rule over every living soul.

Super Sephiroth, slayer of the Uber Fluffy, and battle co-ordionator and defender of the HADB clan.

Diplomacy is all and well, but HADB is better!

Jerome · 09-14-2001, 05:48 PM

As yet another hopeful writer, i can understand you're curiousity.

I'm reading it bit by bit just now, I'll give you my full, and honest opinione (whatever thats worth) after I finish.

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SSJ4Sephiroth · 09-14-2001, 05:51 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Jerome:
As yet another hopeful writer, i can understand you're curiousity.

I'm reading it bit by bit just now, I'll give you my full, and honest opinione (whatever thats worth) after I finish.

alright, thanx jerome! and if you need anybody to read your work and review it, i can try to help!

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It's simple. Once the Planet is hurt, it gathers Spirit Energy to heal the injury. The amount of energy gathered depends on the size of the injury...What would happen if there was an injury that threatened the very life of the Planet? Think how much energy would be gathered! Ha, ha, ha. And at the center of that injury, wil be me. All that boundless energy will be mine. By merging with the energy of the Planet, I will be come a new life form, a new existence. Melding with the Planet, I will cease to exist as I am now. Only to be reborn as a 'God' to rule over every living soul.

Super Sephiroth, slayer of the Uber Fluffy, and battle co-ordionator and defender of the HADB clan.

Diplomacy is all and well, but HADB is better!

Jerome · 09-14-2001, 06:21 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by SSJ4Sephiroth:
alright, thanx jerome! and if you need anybody to read your work and review it, i can try to help!

Beleive me, i'd be more than happy to share my work, if it wasn't all on my sisters laptop, with no Internet conection.

I'll hold you to that when i work it out though.

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09-14-2001, 12:34 AM	#1
SSJ4Sephiroth Beholder Join Date: May 4, 2001 Location: The Outside Looking In Age: 37 Posts: 4,361	hey people, im bored and decided to give you guys a link to a story i wrote a few months ago. WARNING: THE FOLLOWING LINK CONTAINS SOME EXPLICIT MATERIAL. PLEASE PROCEED AT YOUR OWN RISK! AL, AC, AS, V Note#1: if the link does not take you directly to the story, go to the Stories link on the menu bar, then click the middle one. my penname for that site is Seifer(SR) Note#2: do NOT go to any other links on that site, ESPECIALLY the forum! if you think my book is bad your skin may peel off when you see the forum! so heres the link! enjoy! at yer own risk, of course... http://www.geocities.com/lance_sv/ EDIT: hey, tell me what you think! i may use the input for a sequel im writing for it, which may become a source of income if enough people like it... ------------------ It's simple. Once the Planet is hurt, it gathers Spirit Energy to heal the injury. The amount of energy gathered depends on the size of the injury...What would happen if there was an injury that threatened the very life of the Planet? Think how much energy would be gathered! Ha, ha, ha. And at the center of that injury, wil be me. All that boundless energy will be mine. By merging with the energy of the Planet, I will be come a new life form, a new existence. Melding with the Planet, I will cease to exist as I am now. Only to be reborn as a 'God' to rule over every living soul. Super Sephiroth, slayer of the Uber Fluffy, and battle co-ordionator and defender of the HADB clan. Diplomacy is all and well, but HADB is better! [This message has been edited by SSJ4Sephiroth (edited 09-14-2001).] [This message has been edited by SSJ4Sephiroth (edited 09-14-2001).]

09-14-2001, 12:51 AM	#2
Aelia Jusa Iron Throne Cult Join Date: August 23, 2001 Location: Brisbane, Australia Age: 42 Posts: 4,867	Hmmmm. I didn't read it all, but I think I got the general gist. Did they end up getting married? And where did the inspiration for that "this light makes your hair look pretty" line come from? Shades of Aerie and Jaheira I think . Plus I went to the forum. Do you hate me? That sadmucko seemed a bit of a fool.

09-14-2001, 02:30 AM	#3
SSJ4Sephiroth Beholder Join Date: May 4, 2001 Location: The Outside Looking In Age: 37 Posts: 4,361	well, yes, to the first questions. but the third one... no. im perfectly fine with you people going to the forum there, its just not reccommended because i actually rate it NC-17 (if you go back far enough theres actually stuff worse than swearing.) and that sadmucko guy... im trying to show him the ways of IronWorks, but he resists as his nature is flaming. hes not very well liked by the others, and was actually banned from the forum twice! oh well... its a long story. probably shoudla put more time in it tho... i had a 1 chapter per day quota back then, didnt allow for much time to be put into story planning . ------------------ It's simple. Once the Planet is hurt, it gathers Spirit Energy to heal the injury. The amount of energy gathered depends on the size of the injury...What would happen if there was an injury that threatened the very life of the Planet? Think how much energy would be gathered! Ha, ha, ha. And at the center of that injury, wil be me. All that boundless energy will be mine. By merging with the energy of the Planet, I will be come a new life form, a new existence. Melding with the Planet, I will cease to exist as I am now. Only to be reborn as a 'God' to rule over every living soul. Super Sephiroth, slayer of the Uber Fluffy, and battle co-ordionator and defender of the HADB clan. Diplomacy is all and well, but HADB is better!

09-14-2001, 02:59 PM	#4
SSJ4Sephiroth Beholder Join Date: May 4, 2001 Location: The Outside Looking In Age: 37 Posts: 4,361	hmm... people, i seriously want your opinions! ------------------ It's simple. Once the Planet is hurt, it gathers Spirit Energy to heal the injury. The amount of energy gathered depends on the size of the injury...What would happen if there was an injury that threatened the very life of the Planet? Think how much energy would be gathered! Ha, ha, ha. And at the center of that injury, wil be me. All that boundless energy will be mine. By merging with the energy of the Planet, I will be come a new life form, a new existence. Melding with the Planet, I will cease to exist as I am now. Only to be reborn as a 'God' to rule over every living soul. Super Sephiroth, slayer of the Uber Fluffy, and battle co-ordionator and defender of the HADB clan. Diplomacy is all and well, but HADB is better!

09-14-2001, 03:07 PM	#6
SSJ4Sephiroth Beholder Join Date: May 4, 2001 Location: The Outside Looking In Age: 37 Posts: 4,361	i cant link directly to it, its on a subsite. the webmaster is too lazy to get separatie sites . but i posted directions... go to Stories on the sidebar, then click on the middle one that was written by Seifer(SR). ------------------ It's simple. Once the Planet is hurt, it gathers Spirit Energy to heal the injury. The amount of energy gathered depends on the size of the injury...What would happen if there was an injury that threatened the very life of the Planet? Think how much energy would be gathered! Ha, ha, ha. And at the center of that injury, wil be me. All that boundless energy will be mine. By merging with the energy of the Planet, I will be come a new life form, a new existence. Melding with the Planet, I will cease to exist as I am now. Only to be reborn as a 'God' to rule over every living soul. Super Sephiroth, slayer of the Uber Fluffy, and battle co-ordionator and defender of the HADB clan. Diplomacy is all and well, but HADB is better!

09-14-2001, 05:44 PM	#7
SSJ4Sephiroth Beholder Join Date: May 4, 2001 Location: The Outside Looking In Age: 37 Posts: 4,361	hmm people, i need your honest opinions about this writing! does it make you from wanting more, or from braindead stupidity or something? ------------------ It's simple. Once the Planet is hurt, it gathers Spirit Energy to heal the injury. The amount of energy gathered depends on the size of the injury...What would happen if there was an injury that threatened the very life of the Planet? Think how much energy would be gathered! Ha, ha, ha. And at the center of that injury, wil be me. All that boundless energy will be mine. By merging with the energy of the Planet, I will be come a new life form, a new existence. Melding with the Planet, I will cease to exist as I am now. Only to be reborn as a 'God' to rule over every living soul. Super Sephiroth, slayer of the Uber Fluffy, and battle co-ordionator and defender of the HADB clan. Diplomacy is all and well, but HADB is better!

09-14-2001, 05:48 PM	#8
Jerome Knight of the Rose Join Date: January 8, 2001 Location: Scotland Age: 38 Posts: 4,418	As yet another hopeful writer, i can understand you're curiousity. I'm reading it bit by bit just now, I'll give you my full, and honest opinione (whatever thats worth) after I finish. ------------------

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