Poems by the board. - Page 7

Gabriel · 04-07-2001, 10:40 PM

Beautiful, not quite sure I understand it but I only read it twice, oh and thank you.

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Sazerac · 04-07-2001, 10:55 PM

Gabriel: if nothing else, read it as if it were a grown up "Hansel and Grethel"...two people lost in the woods, any woods, especially the forests of a difficult relationship.

Gabriel · 04-07-2001, 11:03 PM

Hmm yes I see it now thank you.

LadyRae · 04-07-2001, 11:35 PM

Sazerac! WOW! That one actually gave me little shivers! Very good! Hi Gabes!

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Sazerac · 04-07-2001, 11:53 PM

Wow, thanks, LadyRae! I'm glad you liked it. Hey, I'm thrilled there's a poetry thread here. I've enjoyed seeing the ones that are here. A lot of good talent!

LadyRae · 04-07-2001, 11:57 PM

You're more than welcome! Your a moderator? We haven't met, have we? Hey, check out my story thread if you get the chance! (And add a story to it? Pressure, pressure

) I agree, there is a lot of talent here!

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Bahamut · 04-08-2001, 12:08 AM

well well well...

Last Push

I have shattered before me
So many times I have lost count
I try to mend my broken self
I am giving my last push

My comrades have already deserted me
My shards have cut them
So many time that we have lost count
They ran out of blood to go on

My black blood has been purified
By the Pulse of Life
I gain strength once more... Finally
But my friends are recovering, cannot move on

It seems a little late
For this effort of mine
And I have wasted
their blood for naught.

thats toward on the happy side... a little.

i love that Haiku... it makes me wanna write love poems... teehee

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Sazerac · 04-08-2001, 12:26 AM

Wow, Bahamut, that's good! It reminded me a little of BOC's "Veteran of the Psychic Wars." I liked it!

LadyRae: No, I don't think we've been formally introduced. How do ye do, M'Lady?

I am Sazerac: Warlock/Barbarian, moderator of the Wizardry 8 board (just getting started up), and veteran poster at Wizards & Warriors forum. I'm just getting started here at General Discussions, but its a lot of fun!

I will check out the story thread. And, hopefully, will have something to add.

Cheers,

LadyRae · 04-08-2001, 12:36 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Sazerac:
Wow, Bahamut, that's good! It reminded me a little of BOC's "Veteran of the Psychic Wars." I liked it!

LadyRae: No, I don't think we've been formally introduced. How do ye do, M'Lady? I am Sazerac: Warlock/Barbarian, moderator of the Wizardry 8 board (just getting started up), and veteran poster at Wizards & Warriors forum. I'm just getting started here at General Discussions, but its a lot of fun!

I will check out the story thread. And, hopefully, will have something to add.

Cheers,

LadyRae curtseys in return. So nice to meet'cha, Sazerac. Um, you might have to dive a little for the story thread (my Prince has been bumping it occasionally...) Thanks! I'll be looking foward to reading it!

Nice poem, Bahamut! Good job, Wise One.

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[This message has been edited by LadyRae (edited 04-08-2001).]

slackerboy · 04-08-2001, 12:40 AM

i'm not much for writing. but the reading has been nice

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04-07-2001, 10:40 PM	#61
Gabriel Emerald Dragon Join Date: March 4, 2001 Location: England Age: 41 Posts: 920	Beautiful, not quite sure I understand it but I only read it twice, oh and thank you. ------------------ "I need no signature. Put together your own conglomeration of words and stick it onto the tail of your email messages in hopes of coming off as clever or deep. My messages speak volumes enough." - Anonymous

04-07-2001, 10:55 PM	#62
Sazerac Ironworks Moderator Join Date: January 7, 2001 Location: Monroe, LA Age: 60 Posts: 7,387	Gabriel: if nothing else, read it as if it were a grown up "Hansel and Grethel"...two people lost in the woods, any woods, especially the forests of a difficult relationship.

04-07-2001, 11:03 PM	#63
Gabriel Emerald Dragon Join Date: March 4, 2001 Location: England Age: 41 Posts: 920	Hmm yes I see it now thank you.

04-07-2001, 11:35 PM	#64
LadyRae Symbol of Cyric Join Date: March 1, 2001 Location: Portland, OR USA Posts: 1,198	Sazerac! WOW! That one actually gave me little shivers! Very good! Hi Gabes! ------------------ Proprietor of The Moon's Hope Inn Conspirator...Um, I mean, member of the Ladies Guild Smitten by The.Relic

04-07-2001, 11:53 PM	#65
Sazerac Ironworks Moderator Join Date: January 7, 2001 Location: Monroe, LA Age: 60 Posts: 7,387	Wow, thanks, LadyRae! I'm glad you liked it. Hey, I'm thrilled there's a poetry thread here. I've enjoyed seeing the ones that are here. A lot of good talent!

04-07-2001, 11:57 PM	#66
LadyRae Symbol of Cyric Join Date: March 1, 2001 Location: Portland, OR USA Posts: 1,198	You're more than welcome! Your a moderator? We haven't met, have we? Hey, check out my story thread if you get the chance! (And add a story to it? Pressure, pressure ) I agree, there is a lot of talent here! ------------------ Proprietor of The Moon's Hope Inn Conspirator...Um, I mean, member of the Ladies Guild Smitten by The.Relic

04-08-2001, 12:08 AM	#67
Bahamut Iron Throne Cult Join Date: March 12, 2001 Location: Manila, Philippines Age: 39 Posts: 4,864	well well well... Last Push I have shattered before me So many times I have lost count I try to mend my broken self I am giving my last push My comrades have already deserted me My shards have cut them So many time that we have lost count They ran out of blood to go on My black blood has been purified By the Pulse of Life I gain strength once more... Finally But my friends are recovering, cannot move on It seems a little late For this effort of mine And I have wasted their blood for naught. thats toward on the happy side... a little. i love that Haiku... it makes me wanna write love poems... teehee ------------------ I...AM...BAHAMUT...AND IT IS YOU PEOPLE...I FEAR

04-08-2001, 12:26 AM	#68
Sazerac Ironworks Moderator Join Date: January 7, 2001 Location: Monroe, LA Age: 60 Posts: 7,387	Wow, Bahamut, that's good! It reminded me a little of BOC's "Veteran of the Psychic Wars." I liked it! LadyRae: No, I don't think we've been formally introduced. How do ye do, M'Lady? I am Sazerac: Warlock/Barbarian, moderator of the Wizardry 8 board (just getting started up), and veteran poster at Wizards & Warriors forum. I'm just getting started here at General Discussions, but its a lot of fun! I will check out the story thread. And, hopefully, will have something to add. Cheers,

04-08-2001, 12:40 AM	#70
slackerboy Gold Dragon Join Date: March 5, 2001 Location: smyrna, tn, usa Age: 46 Posts: 2,506	i'm not much for writing. but the reading has been nice ------------------

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