09-09-2002, 08:33 PM | #11 |
Fzoul Chembryl
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But bertie does do stuff! He saves Almun's butt in that cave! [img]tongue.gif[/img]
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09-09-2002, 08:40 PM | #12 |
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Great story i'm eagerly awaiting the rest of it. [img]smile.gif[/img]
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09-09-2002, 08:42 PM | #13 |
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Willard= Future Writer, more famous than Tolkien and Rowling combined. Thats the only way to describe your talent Willard. Keep up the good work.
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09-09-2002, 08:44 PM | #14 |
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But Almun is the one who cut the rope and untied Bertie...?
BTW, what are the emoticons in this place? I know [img]smile.gif[/img] and but that's it.
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09-09-2002, 08:51 PM | #15 | |
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Edit: Thanks Secretmaster! I thought Bertie cut Almun's ropes though...... I'll go check. Edit again: Yeah, Almun cut Bertie's ropes in the cave, but only because he did not have a blindfold on. [ 09-09-2002, 08:55 PM: Message edited by: Willard ]
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09-09-2002, 09:34 PM | #16 |
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You really should look into getting it published once it's finished... I think it'll be really good. [img]smile.gif[/img] BTW, now I know how to use smileys! Thanks! [img]graemlins/hehe.gif[/img]
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09-10-2002, 05:31 PM | #17 |
Fzoul Chembryl
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Uh oh........ [img]graemlins/jawdrop.gif[/img]
What if someone steals my story and says it's theirs? It's not copyrighted.......
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09-10-2002, 05:44 PM | #18 |
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It's slighty fast-paced, and perhaps a little 'hasty' at times, but I'm hardly qualified to criticise.
Keep writing, and perhaps someone with slightly more authority on these things can give you more of a help. [img]smile.gif[/img]
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09-10-2002, 06:16 PM | #19 |
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Ohhh..... *makes note to self* Write slower. Get professional help. *stops writing* Okay, but where can I find someone that is a real good writer and that can teach me?
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