Groove with Irenicus

[Neomi]

Great job.

A couple of comments: I really liked the way the tune peaked at the "and all I thirsted for was revenge... and I... will... have it!" line. You built it up very nicely to that point. And the repetitive use of "You will suffer... You will all suffer" at the end went really well with the groove you chose.

My only critique would be that there's no bass (at least it didn't come out well on my computer) and the tune is kind of simple. But otherwise, a fine job, especially for 4-5 hours.

[Bons]

Originally posted by Neomi: My only critique would be that there's no bass (at least it didn't come out well on my computer) and the tune is kind of simple. But otherwise, a fine job, especially for 4-5 hours.

I think the most popular suggestion for improvement has been I should have used more bass. I'll keep it in mind the next time, though I'm mainly thinking of doing a Jansen number, like Commo mentioned. There was a little bass in the Irenicus song, though it was only for about 8 seconds, halfway through. That was really my personal preference when I was making it. I was more intent on working a dirty jungle beat in there. [img]smile.gif[/img]

And, yeah, when you're doing everything in one evening, composing and recording a complex tune is not an option. Though, now that I'm thinking about it, even with some songs that I spent weeks on for the Surayah NPC mod, I went with simple background music and focused on the more complex vocals. So maybe it's just: My. Chronic. Slacking.

[Xen]

Welcome to Ironworks! [img]graemlins/happywave.gif[/img] I really really liked it. [img]graemlins/thumbsup.gif[/img] [img]smile.gif[/img]

[Moon-Child_Lman]

Originally posted by Xen: Welcome to Ironworks! [img]graemlins/happywave.gif[/img] I really really liked it. [img]graemlins/thumbsup.gif[/img] [img]smile.gif[/img]

[img]graemlins/lol.gif[/img] While i maybe new, i also love it.