I Shot A Man Today - Page 2

Sever · 03-09-2003, 12:27 AM

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Originally posted by Charlie:
Oddly, I write my poetry with musical lyrics half in my mind....weird no?

Don't you mean 'Weird? No.'

Nice lyrics/prose, Charlie. [img]graemlins/thumbsup.gif[/img] But when i first read the title, i thought you were for real. [img]graemlins/1ponder.gif[/img]

Kakero · 03-09-2003, 01:25 AM

even thought of making an album? with the talent of yours you can make lots of money.

sylent · 03-09-2003, 05:36 AM

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Originally posted by Charlie:
I did.

Thats amazing man.
Touched on a note I've been pondering for far too many days now.
Glad you shared that, I'm both touched and impressed [img]smile.gif[/img]

Mojo · 03-09-2003, 09:58 AM

It strikes me as more poetic than lyrical, but I feel it would work well either way. I'm in awe...do you write often? If not, you should...

RevRuby · 03-09-2003, 04:35 PM

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Originally posted by /)eathKiller:
man... they aughta' make a poetry/free writing forum so folks like you wont have their stuff bumped around so often... Great stuff [img]tongue.gif[/img]

i tried to have a vote for one and instead my thread was hijacked and i was told to go here:

http://www.bratgirlcentral.com/cgi-b.../ikonboard.cgi

Oblivion437 · 03-09-2003, 05:58 PM

Well, don't quit your day job, whatever it may be, as you aren't going to get rich any time soon.

Mouse · 03-10-2003, 03:48 AM

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Originally posted by Oblivion437:
Well, don't quit your day job, whatever it may be, as you aren't going to get rich any time soon.

Oblivion, I have checked the ToS with regard to the obove statement and though I can't find anything specific that it breaches, I do consider it to be dismissive, mean-spirited and somewhat hurtful in it's tone and content.

If you want to critique the poem, by all means do so, and I'm sure the author will value your input, but I would ask that you refrain from such condescending put-downs in future.

LordKathen · 03-10-2003, 04:24 AM

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Originally posted by Mouse:

Quote:
Originally posted by Oblivion437:
Well, don't quit your day job, whatever it may be, as you aren't going to get rich any time soon.

Oblivion, I have checked the ToS with regard to the obove statement and though I can't find anything specific that it breaches, I do consider it to be dismissive, mean-spirited and somewhat hurtful in it's tone and content.

If you want to critique the poem, by all means do so, and I'm sure the author will value your input, but I would ask that you refrain from such condescending put-downs in future.[/QUOTE]Really, not cool man... [img]graemlins/redbite.gif[/img]

Kaltia · 03-10-2003, 05:25 AM

I just saw the new avatars and had the fright of my life

Did you have fun, Charlie? If you're on the run, I'll let you stay in my garage!

Nice poem btw.
Oblivion, did you you were joking but it came out wrong? Happens to us all if it does. Still sounds mean, but oh well.

Nachtrafe · 03-10-2003, 09:09 AM

Awesome poem Charlie(a rude comment or two notwithstanding).

[img]graemlins/thumbsup.gif[/img] LOL You and Yorick should collaborate some day. The way he continent hops, you both should have the opportunity at some point.

03-09-2003, 09:58 AM	#14
Mojo Elminster Join Date: July 17, 2002 Location: Aberdeenshire, Scotland, UK Age: 37 Posts: 451	It strikes me as more poetic than lyrical, but I feel it would work well either way. I'm in awe...do you write often? If not, you should... __________________ Say No to Cosmetics Control! And the Trouser Tyranny!<br /><br />Like Final Fantasy? -[url]\"http://forums.ragnarokextreme.net\" target=\"_blank\">Ragnarok Extreme Forums</a>!!

03-09-2003, 05:58 PM	#16
Oblivion437 Baaz Draconian Join Date: June 17, 2002 Location: NY Age: 37 Posts: 723	Well, don't quit your day job, whatever it may be, as you aren't going to get rich any time soon. __________________ [img]\"http://www.jtdistributing.com/pics/tshirts/experts%20copy.jpg\" alt=\" - \" />

03-10-2003, 05:25 AM	#19
Kaltia Jack Burton Join Date: May 2, 2002 Location: Canterbury, England Age: 37 Posts: 5,817	I just saw the new avatars and had the fright of my life Did you have fun, Charlie? If you're on the run, I'll let you stay in my garage! Nice poem btw. Oblivion, did you you were joking but it came out wrong? Happens to us all if it does. Still sounds mean, but oh well. __________________ The wolf is as cunning as he is ferocious; once he's had a taste of flesh then nothing else will do.

03-10-2003, 09:09 AM	#20
Nachtrafe Red Wizard of Thay Join Date: August 9, 2001 Location: Upstate NY, USA Age: 52 Posts: 889	Awesome poem Charlie(a rude comment or two notwithstanding). [img]graemlins/thumbsup.gif[/img] LOL You and Yorick should collaborate some day. The way he continent hops, you both should have the opportunity at some point. __________________ ~~OFFICIAL BOYTOY OF CLOUDY'S CAFE....WELL...OK...JUST CLOUDY!~~ "May the wings of liberty never lose a feather!"

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