Cloudy's Cafe 02/07/02 - Page 10

Galadria · 02-09-2002, 08:26 AM

Nebbers! And I was thinking that I wouldn't have anybody to talk to. How's everything in the Plane?

Neb · 02-09-2002, 08:30 AM

Boring and depressing as usual [img]tongue.gif[/img]

But one nice thing has happened so far today though [img]smile.gif[/img]

I've begun writing a story [img]smile.gif[/img] so far I think I'm doing well [img]smile.gif[/img]

[ 02-09-2002: Message edited by: Neb ]

Galadria · 02-09-2002, 09:00 AM

Great about the story. Is it fantasy? Are you going to post it? I've done a whole novel, working on a second, but I'm tooo scared to send it to a publisher. Over at the ORT, we're trying to get the neewbie to jump in the chocolate pool with you.

[ 02-09-2002: Message edited by: Galadria ]

Neb · 02-09-2002, 09:03 AM

quote:
Originally posted by Galadria:
Great about the story. Is it fantasy? Are you going to post it? I've done a whole novel, working on a second, but I'm [i]tooo[i] scared to send it to a publisher. Over at the ORT, we're trying to get the newbie to jump in the chocolate pool with you.

It's fantasy, I'm going to get a few opinions on it so far and change any big faults before I post it here at IW.

Currently I've gotten no farther than "introducing" the main character, a bit of the world and building up a bit of mystery.

But when I've edited anything that needs editing in this first part, sure, I'd love to post it here at IW.

And hurry up and convince that newbie.... I'm all alone in the pool [img]tongue.gif[/img]

Galadria · 02-09-2002, 09:11 AM

We're trying. Wait'll Aelia sees that outfit she's wearing. You should go cast nudity on her or something, you're the Psionic/Sorcerer around here.

Neb · 02-09-2002, 09:13 AM

It would be my pleasure

heheheh [img]tongue.gif[/img]

adam warlock · 02-09-2002, 09:17 AM

good morning [img]graemlins/wavey.gif[/img]
been busy... but finally have 2 free days...
put bedridden father, nurses coming and going, computer work, school, and chores into the blender
turn it on without putting the lid on the blender
result: one big mess...
so stressed out

adam warlock · 02-09-2002, 09:22 AM

quote:
Originally posted by Cloudbringer:

Ack! Well, here, have some chocolate honey glazed mini-donuts and some Hazelnut hot chocolate! [img]smile.gif[/img] Won't make life easier but it's fun! LOL

Cloudy

geez [img]graemlins/saywhat.gif[/img] even reading this made my teeth rot! [img]graemlins/wow.gif[/img]

Legolas · 02-09-2002, 09:25 AM

Hi there fellow fantasy fans [img]smile.gif[/img]
Galadria, I'd post a few chapters on a forum somewhere and listen to what other people think (if you haven't done so already). Then send it to a publisher. The worst thing that could happen is that he tells you no [img]smile.gif[/img]

And Neb, it's no use trying to write a story while you're up to your neck in chocolate

Neb · 02-09-2002, 09:29 AM

If you're looking for somewhere to post your story and get opinions, try:

http://bratgirlcentral.com/ouapforum.../ikonboard.cgi

It's a writer/poet's forum [img]smile.gif[/img] Already a few IW members signed up there [img]smile.gif[/img]

02-09-2002, 08:26 AM	#91
Galadria 20th Level Warrior Join Date: November 3, 2001 Location: Texas Age: 54 Posts: 2,830	Nebbers! And I was thinking that I wouldn't have anybody to talk to. How's everything in the Plane? __________________ Lady Galadria,Goddess\' Equal of the O.R.T.; [img]\"http://havak.db-forge.com/portraits/bitmaps/wlf180L.bmp\" alt=\" - \" /><br />\"Romance at short notice was her specialty.\" - Saki <br />Founder of the IW Branch of the Anti-Anomen Society

02-09-2002, 09:00 AM	#93
Galadria 20th Level Warrior Join Date: November 3, 2001 Location: Texas Age: 54 Posts: 2,830	Great about the story. Is it fantasy? Are you going to post it? I've done a whole novel, working on a second, but I'm tooo scared to send it to a publisher. Over at the ORT, we're trying to get the neewbie to jump in the chocolate pool with you. [ 02-09-2002: Message edited by: Galadria ] __________________ Lady Galadria,Goddess\' Equal of the O.R.T.; [img]\"http://havak.db-forge.com/portraits/bitmaps/wlf180L.bmp\" alt=\" - \" /><br />\"Romance at short notice was her specialty.\" - Saki <br />Founder of the IW Branch of the Anti-Anomen Society

02-09-2002, 09:03 AM	#94
Neb Account deleted by Request Join Date: May 17, 2001 Location: . Age: 38 Posts: 8,802	quote: Originally posted by Galadria: Great about the story. Is it fantasy? Are you going to post it? I've done a whole novel, working on a second, but I'm [i]tooo[i] scared to send it to a publisher. Over at the ORT, we're trying to get the newbie to jump in the chocolate pool with you. It's fantasy, I'm going to get a few opinions on it so far and change any big faults before I post it here at IW. Currently I've gotten no farther than "introducing" the main character, a bit of the world and building up a bit of mystery. But when I've edited anything that needs editing in this first part, sure, I'd love to post it here at IW. And hurry up and convince that newbie.... I'm all alone in the pool [img]tongue.gif[/img]

02-09-2002, 09:11 AM	#95
Galadria 20th Level Warrior Join Date: November 3, 2001 Location: Texas Age: 54 Posts: 2,830	We're trying. Wait'll Aelia sees that outfit she's wearing. You should go cast nudity on her or something, you're the Psionic/Sorcerer around here. __________________ Lady Galadria,Goddess\' Equal of the O.R.T.; [img]\"http://havak.db-forge.com/portraits/bitmaps/wlf180L.bmp\" alt=\" - \" /><br />\"Romance at short notice was her specialty.\" - Saki <br />Founder of the IW Branch of the Anti-Anomen Society

02-09-2002, 09:17 AM	#97
adam warlock Ma'at - Goddess of Truth & Justice Join Date: January 7, 2001 Location: I live inside of my mind..... Age: 53 Posts: 3,234	good morning [img]graemlins/wavey.gif[/img] been busy... but finally have 2 free days... put bedridden father, nurses coming and going, computer work, school, and chores into the blender turn it on without putting the lid on the blender result: one big mess... so stressed out __________________ [url]\"http://motdw.comicgenesis.com\" target=\"_blank\"><br /> [img]\"http://motdw.keenspace.com/images/lymanimaca.txt\" alt=\" - \" /></a><br /><br />my karma ran over your dogma

02-09-2002, 08:30 AM	#92
Neb Account deleted by Request Join Date: May 17, 2001 Location: . Age: 38 Posts: 8,802	Boring and depressing as usual [img]tongue.gif[/img] But one nice thing has happened so far today though [img]smile.gif[/img] I've begun writing a story [img]smile.gif[/img] so far I think I'm doing well [img]smile.gif[/img] [ 02-09-2002: Message edited by: Neb ]

02-09-2002, 09:13 AM	#96
Neb Account deleted by Request Join Date: May 17, 2001 Location: . Age: 38 Posts: 8,802	It would be my pleasure heheheh [img]tongue.gif[/img]

02-09-2002, 09:22 AM	#98
adam warlock Ma'at - Goddess of Truth & Justice Join Date: January 7, 2001 Location: I live inside of my mind..... Age: 53 Posts: 3,234	quote: Originally posted by Cloudbringer: Ack! Well, here, have some chocolate honey glazed mini-donuts and some Hazelnut hot chocolate! [img]smile.gif[/img] Won't make life easier but it's fun! LOL Cloudy geez [img]graemlins/saywhat.gif[/img] even reading this made my teeth rot! [img]graemlins/wow.gif[/img] __________________ [url]\"http://motdw.comicgenesis.com\" target=\"_blank\"><br /> [img]\"http://motdw.keenspace.com/images/lymanimaca.txt\" alt=\" - \" /></a><br /><br />my karma ran over your dogma

02-09-2002, 09:25 AM	#99
Legolas Jack Burton Join Date: March 31, 2001 Location: The zephyr lands beneath the brine. Age: 39 Posts: 5,459	Hi there fellow fantasy fans [img]smile.gif[/img] Galadria, I'd post a few chapters on a forum somewhere and listen to what other people think (if you haven't done so already). Then send it to a publisher. The worst thing that could happen is that he tells you no [img]smile.gif[/img] And Neb, it's no use trying to write a story while you're up to your neck in chocolate

02-09-2002, 09:29 AM	#100
Neb Account deleted by Request Join Date: May 17, 2001 Location: . Age: 38 Posts: 8,802	If you're looking for somewhere to post your story and get opinions, try: http://bratgirlcentral.com/ouapforum.../ikonboard.cgi It's a writer/poet's forum [img]smile.gif[/img] Already a few IW members signed up there [img]smile.gif[/img]

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