another poem........

SomeGuy · 06-09-2002, 06:33 PM

Well here is a poem i made up.For some reason i don't want to be a scientest anymore.I want to be a writer.Feel free to add more poems.

I think back into times of joy,
when I was but a young teenage boy,
Way back then you said you would be my wife,
Now you're gone and I live a tormented life.
Please take me away from this hellish place,
take me into a place that will bring a smile to my face,
to see you again would be a great joy,
we would talk of the memories when I was that young teenage boy,
When we would do stuff together all day,
and wish that the day would stay.
But that will never happen,
No,not in this lifetime.
So now I sit and wonder why,
Why you,my love,my hope,had to die?

Okay,i think it was kinda corny,but i like it.Plz tell me what you guys think.

uss · 06-09-2002, 06:59 PM

a lovely poem [img]smile.gif[/img] . if im not wrong, you may have some talent.

SomeGuy · 06-09-2002, 09:35 PM

Thank you uss.I have made another poem.

The nights are cold and lonely,
My longing for you grows each day.
In my bed laying all alone,
thinking of the talks we had on the phone.
And that longing inside grows each day,
that longing inside now bigger and stronger,but to my dismay
You are gone.....

[ 06-09-2002, 09:43 PM: Message edited by: SomeGuy ]

SomeGuy · 06-09-2002, 10:05 PM

Oh and another poem that I like that my Grandfather wrote.he is currently dead.I miss him.He was my favorite family member along with his wife my grandma.So this poem shall be a tribute to them both.

Ever Close In Mnd And Heart.

No further away than a picture
a smile or remembered phrase,
our loved ones live in memory-
so close in many ways.

For how often does a sunset
bring nostagic thoughts to mind
of moments
that loved ones shared
in days now left behind!

How often has a flower
or a crystal autumn sky
brought golden recollection
of happy days gone by!

Memory has a magic way
of keeping loved ones near-
ver close in mind and heart
are the ones we hold most dear.......

Grimslade · 06-10-2002, 08:45 AM

That some nice stuff there mate. Keep it up!

06-09-2002, 06:33 PM	#1
SomeGuy Unicorn Join Date: May 14, 2002 Location: Oklahoma, USA Age: 34 Posts: 4,238	Well here is a poem i made up.For some reason i don't want to be a scientest anymore.I want to be a writer.Feel free to add more poems. I think back into times of joy, when I was but a young teenage boy, Way back then you said you would be my wife, Now you're gone and I live a tormented life. Please take me away from this hellish place, take me into a place that will bring a smile to my face, to see you again would be a great joy, we would talk of the memories when I was that young teenage boy, When we would do stuff together all day, and wish that the day would stay. But that will never happen, No,not in this lifetime. So now I sit and wonder why, Why you,my love,my hope,had to die? Okay,i think it was kinda corny,but i like it.Plz tell me what you guys think. __________________ \"I firmly believe that any man\'s finest hour, the greatest fulfillment of all that he holds dear, is the moment when he has worked his heart out in a good cause and lies exhausted on the field of battle - victorious.\"<br />-Vince Lombardi

06-09-2002, 09:35 PM	#3
SomeGuy Unicorn Join Date: May 14, 2002 Location: Oklahoma, USA Age: 34 Posts: 4,238	Thank you uss.I have made another poem. The nights are cold and lonely, My longing for you grows each day. In my bed laying all alone, thinking of the talks we had on the phone. And that longing inside grows each day, that longing inside now bigger and stronger,but to my dismay You are gone..... [ 06-09-2002, 09:43 PM: Message edited by: SomeGuy ] __________________ \"I firmly believe that any man\'s finest hour, the greatest fulfillment of all that he holds dear, is the moment when he has worked his heart out in a good cause and lies exhausted on the field of battle - victorious.\"<br />-Vince Lombardi

06-09-2002, 10:05 PM	#4
SomeGuy Unicorn Join Date: May 14, 2002 Location: Oklahoma, USA Age: 34 Posts: 4,238	Oh and another poem that I like that my Grandfather wrote.he is currently dead.I miss him.He was my favorite family member along with his wife my grandma.So this poem shall be a tribute to them both. Ever Close In Mnd And Heart. No further away than a picture a smile or remembered phrase, our loved ones live in memory- so close in many ways. For how often does a sunset bring nostagic thoughts to mind of moments that loved ones shared in days now left behind! How often has a flower or a crystal autumn sky brought golden recollection of happy days gone by! Memory has a magic way of keeping loved ones near- ver close in mind and heart are the ones we hold most dear....... __________________ \"I firmly believe that any man\'s finest hour, the greatest fulfillment of all that he holds dear, is the moment when he has worked his heart out in a good cause and lies exhausted on the field of battle - victorious.\"<br />-Vince Lombardi

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06-09-2002, 06:59 PM	#2
uss 20th Level Warrior Join Date: November 16, 2001 Location: Estonia Age: 36 Posts: 2,775	a lovely poem [img]smile.gif[/img] . if im not wrong, you may have some talent.

06-10-2002, 08:45 AM	#5
Grimslade Drow Warrior Join Date: April 25, 2002 Location: Australia Age: 43 Posts: 271	That some nice stuff there mate. Keep it up!

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