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Old 04-26-2004, 10:16 AM   #21
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umm... i really hate to comment bad things.. but arent you going a little too far with the romance thing? i mean they just known each other for a couple of days and now in the latest chapter you know. i just find it a little fast paced. but still its a good story.
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Old 04-26-2004, 10:35 AM   #22
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umm... i really hate to comment bad things.. but arent you going a little too far with the romance thing? i mean they just known each other for a couple of days and now in the latest chapter you know. i just find it a little fast paced. but still its a good story.
A valid comment I think..i guess it depends how long you plan on making the finished story! Wonderful read, please keep them coming, i'm thoroughly enjoying it. [img]smile.gif[/img]
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Old 07-07-2004, 02:05 PM   #23
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Wow...I missed on these posts...I'm really sorry guys!

I've been absent a lot from Ironworks lately, first I had exams, and then more and more things took up my time. However, I have finally provided another update, the future ones should be far more frequent. [img]smile.gif[/img] I'm really sorry for taking this long! I hope I haven't lost any of you...

I was afraid someone would say that about the romance. I guess it may have been a little too early...but then, they are young elves, a little rasher than older elves. This gives me a chance to add more obstacles in the relationship, and allows me to explore their personalities and flesh them out a little. I really appreciate the comments, thank you so much! It's so heartwarming to know people actually like and enjoy my story. ^_^

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Please any comments you wish!

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Originally posted by dplax:
</font><blockquote>quote:</font><hr /> I mean what would do without me?
Here you are missing a word, probably he or you. Otherwis great ending to the chapter. Keep up the good work.

EDIT: When is the next update?
</font>[/QUOTE]I'm pretty sure that's how the sentence should be...you know:
"I mean, what would you do without me?"
I can't say I see where a he or you fits in...thanks for your compliment though! ^_^ And the next update is up!

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