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Okay these threads went really well on the last board and I thought I make one here...... Just consider it high grade spam. Post away people, no one will be turn away, all levels of skill avabile....We even take the man/women from venus stuff.
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Hi Gabriel !
Not a poem, either, unfortunately - as English is not my native language I have to refrain from mutilating it by trying to write poetry in it. http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...iles/frown.gif But have you seen my invitation on the BG II Forum to found a club of broken hearts on this forum ? You could be the Co-president. http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...miles/wink.gif ------------------ So long ! R³ |
Yes and I replied.
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Gabriel, I was gone for a long time, so I never got to meet you. I saw your thread on the old board when I came back and I am glad you dicieded to stay!
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Thank you Relic, how is your daughter by the way?
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Heh http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...iles/smile.gif , thank you for asking. Britt is doing well, she sure hates her crutches already http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...iles/smile.gif You know, this has always been the best group of people on any forum I have been a member of, and that is quite a few. Ya gotta love these people http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...iles/smile.gif
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Gabriel and Ramon - You guys touch my heart.
I guess I'll put a poem in since nobody else has yet. Wish we could grab those poems on the old board too. BEAUTIFUL KILLER If you asked yourself waht is the most dangerous thing on earth, What would it be? Thinking long and hard on the subject I came up with Beauty Now I'm not talking about the Human Race With all our hatred and Mirth What I mean is our External Surroundings Things of Nature and of the Earth I fear the Purity and Serenity of Snowfall Piling up relentlessly in an Icy Heap I see the fatal potential even in these Modern Times Our existence relies on Gas and Electric Heat I fear the excitement of a Thunderstorm The way intimidating everyday scenery looks Surreal I can get mezmerized by the Lightning Display And then am reminded of its accuracy to Kill I fear the neon lava flowing Erupting Volcanos That ultimately and inevitably creat new Land Mass And the beautiful engulfing flames of a Forest Fire That nourishes the old soil depleted from the Past I fear the righteous arrogance of a Tornado Proudly spinning its mark upon its Chosen Path And the life awakening kick of an Earthquake Rattling the consciousness of all in its Wrath Our civilization presents an Illusion of Durability Hiding the Truth of our Growing Vulnerability These are God's beautiful creations for the Human Race At least we know we can all die with a Smile on our Face ------------------ http://www.angelfire.com/rpg/stealthy/KungFuGal.gif |
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Heres an impromptu, so sorry...
the dark clouds await me i float up, toward the dar sky i leave my life, i leave my sorrow behind me renewed i rise renewed i smile i see the stars the stars gaze on me with question why did i leave? why did i go on where you should not have and live till you have to? i said at least for the time being before i crash down give me some time to fly to do the things i never could do on the ground enjoy the laughter savor the crisp air love the colors appreciate the creation before i go crashing down... sniff.... ------------------ http://tobbin.tripod.com/sephlove.gif Tifa has her Cloud, Squall his Rinoa, Sephiroth?? hehe |
Good to see this thread up again! And we do have so many talents!!
Hmm, have to scrub my roughy head and see if I can comeback with something.. ------------------ http://www.najk.net/wolfgir/bilder/wolfie.gif ::HOWLING WOLFGIR THE MAD WOLF:: |
good thing wolfie... hey, do you get my poem? know what its about?
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Well griever, sounds to me that you are way up now, perhaps in love? or something good that you feel you are undeserved of, but you think it will not last due to the crashing down part.. Am I totally out in the cold??
hard to tell with poems, though it is the images you get in your own heads that makes them good. ------------------ http://www.najk.net/wolfgir/bilder/wolfie.gif ::HOWLING WOLFGIR THE MAD WOLF:: |
Gabriel - I think we have a deal then. http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...miles/wink.gif We will have to call a founding meeting
and draw up a charta. LadyWendy, nice work. It seems true artists are always inspired by the things right at their hands. http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...iles/smile.gif Griever - Your poem gives me the idea you might want to become founding member of the Club of Broken Hearts. Your boardname alone predestines you for it. http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...miles/wink.gif ------------------ So long ! R³ - Co-president(s) of the Club of Broken Hearts |
Here is a haiku that is sort of inspired by the moment:
I should be working but I'm writing here instead Yay selfemployment! Gotta love the Japanese for coming up with such an easy way to write legit poetry! I'll do a sonnet later. Azrael Abyss ------------------ I'm the prince of sorrow... Woooo! |
Magic
Magic is not tangible I can’t be kept or held, It lives around us In the sky, clouds and moon, In every plant that grows, Every voice that sings, Magic is not a tangible thing, But it can be seen, In the eyes of children, The smile of a lover, And faces of friends, Magic is a loving thing It makes us live, Expands our minds, Enriches our souls, Magic is not a tangible thing, But it touches our lives every day. ------------------ http://www.angelfire.com/yt2/gabe/images/Angle.gif Co-president of the Club of Broken Hearts |
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That was truly beautiful Gabriel!
I'll post another one tomorrow if you do. Of course, I'm running out so they won't be as good as yours! http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...miles/wink.gif http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...iles/smile.gif B U M P ! ------------------ http://www.angelfire.com/rpg/stealthy/KungFuGal.gif |
You are a magician with words, Gabriel, my friend ! http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...iles/smile.gif http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...miles/wink.gif
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A few nonsensical shorts...
'A Dragon's Treasure' There is a dragon's treasure few can find, Smooooth scales, pert nose, and tight behind, Excepting her balefule eye and belching gasses, She has beauty and grace like pretty lasses. 'tho the most treasure amourous knights will get, likey will be to end as a charcoal briquette. 'The ballad of the Lost Army' ... O' Seargent, my seargent, our fearful battle is done, We're a bunch of losers, The other side has won. Conscripted like cannon fodder, we fought from fear, not for honor, 'tho the cause was true and just, When the seargent bit the dust, Swift warrior-cowards ran like hell, Suddenly forgetting their battle lust. 'Heroes Schmeroes' Heroes, schmeroes have no fear-oes, They fight for fun, they fight for Gyros, Fame, treasure, pride, and lust, No love for justice, more for beer-oes. 'The forgotten King' The forgotten King went out to sail, Friendly breeze turned raging gale, His three-hour tour now sixty-year, The loyal knights have yet to note, The missing king and his missing boat. -Grebki ------------------ Why, sometimes I've believed as many as six impossible things before breakfast. And then I went and made at least three of them come true before lunch. |
LadyZ it is a deal. Here is my poem, I look forward to hear yours.
I sit, Staring in out to sea, The salted wind, Blowing away the tears, I hear the laughter, The joyous tones, And it brings pain to me, I will not dance, Nor sing or play, Never shall I laugh, And smile at something said to me, My only joy, The shinning light, My grail, is gone, Taken from me, So I sit, Beyond the signs, Passed the fence, As I have every night, And will for a thousand more, Since the blackest of days, I sit and wait, Wait for the world to know, I am dead, I have been since that day. ------------------ http://www.angelfire.com/yt2/gabe/images/Angle.gif Co-president of the Club of Broken Hearts |
On a small world,
Afloat in a sea of stars, A place filled, By a few billion souls, One of these souls, Mirrors my own, To think, one soul, In this multitude, Is the one I seek? The shear chance, To meet my mate, Is 1:3.16 billion? And growing every day, If this one finds someone, And give up searching for me. So don’t tell me I’ll find the one, And there is plenty of fish in the sea, For our time is short, This world to large, For a lonely guy, like me. |
Haven't forgotten you Gabriel. I'm on it as soon as I get off the phone with all the realtors. Be back!
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Sheesh Gabriel. Like I said, running out of good ones here. Damn! Don't get me wrong, I have quite a few written down but some aren't written as well as I would like. Anyway, a short one:
PAINFUL REMINDER You are a painful reminder of what could Be If fate intervened and handed me the Key To the door of my ultimate Destiny But common sense rules my Existence Mental dependence is of utmost Importance Depression screams for Attention Happiness is merely an Assumption Which side will win the emotional War Will I sink or will I Soar? The boat has many Holes The oar has many Goals And the struggle Continues... ------------------ http://www.angelfire.com/rpg/stealthy/KungFuGal.gif |
thats great zekke!
hehe... the poem i wrote somewhere on top is really about suicide... hehehe man, i can't think right now... ------------------ http://tobbin.tripod.com/sephlove.gif Tifa has her Cloud, Squall his Rinoa, Sephiroth?? hehe |
Don't even go down that road BRO! Nice to see ya BTW!
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yeah... hehe you too sis, you too... you log on ih the morning... well in where i live... so ill log on on mornings now! http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...iles/smile.gif
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LW, please go and see my apology/explanation on the other thread. It was a big misunderstanding ! http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...iles/frown.gif
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dont worry too much ramon! we are bumping the thread fer ye! http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...es/biggrin.gif
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Not trying or intending to offend anyone, but for me personally, I'd say that Grebki is the really talented one here, for writing those ironic, acid little poems that relativise things rather than enlarge them to giant size. My compliments!
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impromptu number 2: Stress Reliever
i tread on this land on where i see destruction glass shards cutting my feet some objects beyond recognition i hear screams of rage desperate cries a wolfs howl of despair i hear hatred, with no hint of care in it i have entered virgin territory a place i do not know its vocabulary escapes me i am alone, with no allies i am in a wasteland on where we throw our madness into this black hole of nothingness ------------------ http://publish.hometown.aol.com/tobb...s/sephlove.gif Tifa has her Cloud, Squall his Rinoa, Sephiroth?? |
Moonlit nite
Stars above with my love, with me love a lingering touch heartfelt kiss happiness with my love, with my love words unsaid thoughts mispoke with my love, with my love misunderstanding thoughtlessness feelings hurt feeling betrayed with my love, with my love phone call in the night anger pain suffering talking it out with my love, with my love a second ring in the night crying laughing forgiving with my love, with my love driving hugs embrace intimacy with my love, with my love side by side smiling sleeping with my love, with my love. |
My thanks to Melusine. I appreciate the compliment, but unfortunately now my ego is swelling to unusual size.
-Grebki P.S. I like this thread, there is real talent among the poets here. ------------------ Why, sometimes I've believed as many as six impossible things before breakfast. And then I went and made at least three of them come true before lunch. |
Once again I am humbled. You guys are all terrific writers! I love it! Don't stop now!
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walking,
always forward, never back, not waiting, or slowing, walking, ever onwards, from the past. to the future, ever walking, never reaching, Alway walking endless foot falls, echos of bone on stone, flesh long worn away, contining, never stopping, Walking, one foot first, the other second, right,TICK, left, TOCK, ever walking, never stopping, never waiting, from the start, until the end, endless walking. ------------------ http://www.angelfire.com/yt2/gabe/images/angel |
that was good trias.. hehe very good. http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...es/biggrin.gif
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He comes,
unbiden, undesired, He comes, No thunder, Or lighting, Just perfect sun, He comes, And leave ruin, unchangable moments, Unbiden, unwanted, uncalled, He comes. |
sounds like tragedy... well, yeah. f*ck it... http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...es/biggrin.gif
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Griever 'HE' is ment to be anger but it written so people can make 'HE' what ever they want.
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yes... its this figurative thing that only the author knows. i mean the poems true intention... http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...iles/smile.gif nice stuff..
always a phrase or two words for more emphasis right? ------------------ http://publish.hometown.aol.com/tobb...s/sephlove.gif Tifa loves her Cloud, Squall loves his Rinoa, Sephiroth... loves his Masamune.:) |
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