hey 250 is it a translation?
and would that account for the need to (add) words that
didn't exist in the original language , but are needed to be understandable once translated?

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it is a translation.
there s one problem about translations is, rythm and tune exists in one language might not sound as good in another. this poem has a powerful emotion when reading in chinese, however, it does not have the same effect in english.

i know what you mean, its really a shame. i would like to be able to speak them all so i could read the ideas in the way they were thought http://www.tgeweb.com/cgi-bin/ubb/no...es/biggrin.gif

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To The Dearly Beloved

Death is no stranger to us
Nor is it unknown
But when it strikes
It always cathces us by suprise

And the beloved person is gone, forever

How are we going to remember
The ones we see no more
Our minds and hearts
Don't do good clinging on to the past]

Whatever you do, whatever you try, it fades away slowly into the sands of time

We WILL forget, no matter what
The names deeds, actions will be made void
And yet still, they live on
For we have taken a part of them with us

We take their spirit with us, which remembers, but it knows no time, place, or name

They live on
Without us knowing it
We still live on for them
And they will live, forever

Memories won't do, it is what they instill in our hearts taht will count. Always.

I think i have never written a poem here that aint mine. http://www.tgeweb.com/cgi-bin/ubb/no...miles/wink.gif

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Balls, balls no balls at all, she married a man that had no balls at all,
her mother said "well come now dear daughter and don't be a sap, I had the same trouble when I married your Pap, there's many a man that will come to the call....to the wife of the man with no balls at all". http://www.tgeweb.com/cgi-bin/ubb/no...es/biggrin.gif

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One love, peace.

I spam all day and all night long but nothing compares to the size of my shlong.

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Im ridickalickalis like a booger I stick to this. Take a whiff of this. One stinky stinky aha ha twoooooo stinky stinky aha ha.

If you saw the pest this will make sense.

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what are you guys talking about in this poetic thread?

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bumping for everyone to read... http://www.tgeweb.com/cgi-bin/ubb/no...iles/smile.gif

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I went walking
through a field
I found a flower, and looked inside
I found you

I went walking
through a forest
I found a tree, and looked inside
I found you

I went walking
on a beach
I found a shell, and looked inside
I found you

I went walking
through a dream
I looked inside
I found you

-1990 what can I say? I was in love


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Mm, here is a new piece I wrote just a couple of minutes ago..

cause I´m worth it..

I sit here, surrounded by products protesting my statement that I´m not their combined smiles, attitudes and lies.
I didn´t get happier buying that toathpaste, and I don´t smile more oftern either.
I didn´t get a cool and hip looking girl after buying thoose jeans. I didn´t became that hip girls fantasy boy either. Just me in jeans that makes people on the TV cool.

I steer my shoopingcart through the isles of lies and deceptions on my way to to were I spend my lifevalue against products that are supposed to make me smile. Doesn´t feel like that asshauling I got from a "not so happy" customer was worth one gigantic pizza bakeup and a soap that are supposed to make you´re skin great. For who? Next unpleasant customer??

Only happy people that do the dishes, get happy and also have nicer hair. My dream is to get the currage to shave it alloff, I´m just afraid that I´ll look like an egg...
Why aren´t there any things for me? I mean, a slogan like this:
"Ok, I´m still pissed, angry and not dating the woman of my dreams, but at least I had no trouble choosing this washing powder, it gets things clean.."?

On the other way, I´m part of making thoose lies, but then I call it "glorification" of a product. Nothing wrong, it´s a living. A living made complete bye smiling products versus angry and non understanding people paying for making other people think they´re getting happier or cooler buying their products.

I´m pointing a gun to my head......
The chamber is loaded.........
The cock is readied.....
but hey, it´s a .44 Magnum....
cause I´m worth it...

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WOLF WINS EVERY FIGHT BUT ONE, AND IN THAT ONE, HE DIES

Bumpbumperooni!!

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I marvel at the mirror,
Standing before me,
Seeing the man I am
Wondering who it could be,

I have grown older now,
With a shock of gray,
I lived life happy,
People would say,

But if they could see,
The journey I took,
They would know I was lost,
Like a fish on a hook,

I tried to help people,
As much as I could,
Never thinking,
If I really should,

Did I help to guide them,
Or did I make them lose their way,
The way seems paved with gold,
But really it's grey,

A long time ago,
An angel came to me,
I brushed her off,
But she didn't flee,

She waited with patience,
Until I let her near,
Then she told me something,
That took away my fear,

She told me God's grace,
And touched my soul,
Thereby walking me,
Away from my hole,

I didn't understand at first,
But listened more,
Then I knew what it took,
To make life soar,

She told me to live,
You can't fear to die,
Thereby revealing,
The little white lie,

If you make your friends safe,
And keep them warm,
A Love will echo out,
And that is the norm,

As I watch the mirror fade,
Tears start to flow,
For I can only hope,
The flower of love will grow,

You see,
The mirror I see as I fade away,
Is in the hearts of people,
I met day to day.

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Tobbin ,dear friend... That was really good. I think I understand what you mean.