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A shattered mind,
thinking in tangents, a spark into fire, losing the thread, lossed the plot, can't concentrate, Mind wonders, no answers only questions, inpersonal, avoided, no help, words, meaning lost, slience, perhaps it is best. |
Griever I only just noticed that it only two words per line.
oh <font size=36>WHERE IS EVERYONE ELSES POEMS!!!!!!! COME ON. <font size=1> Or I'm going to post again and again with crude verses. |
There you are Gabriel! Where've you been?!! Check our our story thread, Stealthy didn't show up, so it's your turn! I added a bit to it. http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...iles/smile.gif
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the distraught heart
wanders wanders into space walking blindy walking gently waving for someone to see waving for someone to help wailing for someone to hear wailing for someone to care weaving itself for beauty weaving itself so it pleases the eye wandering still waving still wailing still weaving still wondering where could have all the people gone? there! now ya happy? you forced me to think! http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...es/biggrin.gif ------------------ http://publish.hometown.aol.com/tobb...s/sephlove.gif Tifa loves her Cloud, Squall loves his Rinoa, Sephiroth... loves his Masamune.:) |
Sorry griver but you now what they say, first times always the hardest. http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...es/biggrin.gif
Good poem. How do you come up with them? |
i wanted to try something new. i incorporated your writing style, you know, the two-three word punch? hehe...
as for coming up with them, i just think impromptu. i usually start with a phrase and work from there... well, thats impromptu number three:the distraught heart. http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...es/biggrin.gif ------------------ http://publish.hometown.aol.com/tobb...s/sephlove.gif Tifa loves her Cloud, Squall loves his Rinoa, Sephiroth... loves his Masamune.:) |
Griever, our styles aren't that different, mine are usally inspared by a word or thought and are normal written down first time in the post box.
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yep! or how bout a thought? just think of one thing, and these emotions start to develop.. lots of 'em that you can formulate into poetry...
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Standing alone,
in a crowd of friends, Know to all, Yet unknow at heart, Being what they want, But not me, So long a copy, I lost myself , I'm a pretender, A fake, A shadow of peers, Yet alone I am, What am I? WHAT AM I? (Hmmmmm....... Not the best I ever done, but probably the oddest.) |
wow... like a riddle and poem, and pissed off man all in one! http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...es/biggrin.gif
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wow... like a riddle and poem, and pissed off man all in one! http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...es/biggrin.gif
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There was a young noble named Dick,
Who head was shaped like a prick, When walking in town, He tripped and when down, On a lass named Nervese, And got his head wedged in her crevasse. [This message has been edited by Gabriel (edited 03-25-2001).] |
Gabriel! There you are!! Missed you!!! Sadly, I am ready to pass out so I have to go now. Tired! Come back tomorrow will ya?
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Zorry I will not be comming back to the board for a while.
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Staring at the sky,
I dream of you, Right now I feel fine, Knowing that the same stars shine down apon you, Seas and miles may be between us, But when we stare at the same sky, We are standing by each other side, Under the gazes of Pavo and Lupus, The shinnig light of Grus, Fornax and Equuleus, I dream about walking beside Eridanus holding your hand, Watchig the ticking of Horologium and the filght of Apus, Placing Corona Borealis apon your brow, and proclamming my love in font of Ara, Oh how I look apon these stars, dreaming of you, my love. ------------------ http://www.angelfire.com/yt2/gabe/images/angel In the memory of a friend. |
You sure know how to make a comeback Gabriel. Wow. Absolutely beautiful poem!! Exquisite! I love this poem!!!! Sorry. Just think you are very talented. I'm going to have to copy this one because it is so beautiful I think. You continue to confound me Gabriel, so many sides of your personality to appreciate.... http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...iles/smile.gif
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Found this and had to share it.
The only problem with Haiku is that you just get started and then - Author unknown |
Okay that it is anyone else ever going to post a freaking poem here, come on anything! I don't care if it rymes, what laungue it is or anything else if anyone was one or just some work of the top of your heads!!! Come I'm trying to bring a little bit of magic to the board, am I alone in this quest! sigh some time I wonder why I bother, you try and bring class to the barbains and what do they do, why beat you with a club of course! sigh.
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Okay, here goes my first poem to the General Discussions board. This is one from my latest story at the Wizards & Warriors Story Archive. Hope you like it.
When the Sun went down, He stole the Moon away, And falling, one by one, the stars all left the sky, Not so long ago, Happily evers and afters entwined, and breadcrumbs showed us the way, out of the woods. Come take my hand, Better stay close to me, Did you hear a sound? Was it only the wind? Not so long ago, Happily evers and afters were one, and candles on altars once led, out of the woods. How can we go on, Knowing the fate we face, and how can we find strength, in that which we cannot erase? Are we all alone? Who'll tell our story, then? Can we turn the page, or is this the End? Once upon a time, Happily evers and afters held sway, But sometimes the breadcrumbs meet birds, and sometimes the candles meet winds, And sometimes there's no easy way, out of the woods... http://www.wizardrealm.com/images/sazerac.jpg |
Beautiful, not quite sure I understand it but I only read it twice, oh and thank you.
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Gabriel: if nothing else, read it as if it were a grown up "Hansel and Grethel"...two people lost in the woods, any woods, especially the forests of a difficult relationship.
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Hmm yes I see it now thank you.
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Sazerac! WOW! That one actually gave me little shivers! Very good! Hi Gabes! http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...es/xyxwave.gif
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Wow, thanks, LadyRae! I'm glad you liked it. Hey, I'm thrilled there's a poetry thread here. I've enjoyed seeing the ones that are here. A lot of good talent!
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You're more than welcome! Your a moderator? We haven't met, have we? Hey, check out my story thread if you get the chance! (And add a story to it? Pressure, pressure http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...miles/wink.gif ) I agree, there is a lot of talent here! http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...iles/smile.gif
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well well well... http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...iles/smile.gif
Last Push I have shattered before me So many times I have lost count I try to mend my broken self I am giving my last push My comrades have already deserted me My shards have cut them So many time that we have lost count They ran out of blood to go on My black blood has been purified By the Pulse of Life I gain strength once more... Finally But my friends are recovering, cannot move on It seems a little late For this effort of mine And I have wasted their blood for naught. thats toward on the happy side... a little. i love that Haiku... it makes me wanna write love poems... teehee http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...es/biggrin.gif ------------------ http://publish.hometown.aol.com/tobb...es/bahamut.gif I...AM...BAHAMUT...AND IT IS YOU PEOPLE...I FEAR |
Wow, Bahamut, that's good! It reminded me a little of BOC's "Veteran of the Psychic Wars." I liked it!
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Nice poem, Bahamut! Good job, Wise One. ------------------ Proprietor of The Moon's Hope Inn Conspirator...Um, I mean, member of the Ladies Guild Smitten by The.Relic http://www.phpshop.net/images/slackerboy/waveface2.gif [This message has been edited by LadyRae (edited 04-08-2001).] |
i'm not much for writing. but the reading has been nice http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...miles/wink.gif
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umm.. of course... it was me who made it... im one of the best!!!! next to gabriel, zekke, memnoch... uhh.. everyone? http://www.tgeweb.com/ironworks/cgi-...es/biggrin.gif
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What colour is the sky?
Between dawn and dusk, When both night and day have fled away, What colour is the sky to those that fly, Or craw in the muck or dance in the dark, What question is this? So flimsy and dumb, What colour the sky, Why ask young one, What colour is the sky? To we who are blind, Who watch our feet and never look up, Or those that dwell under smog What colour the sky, It not, it’s a trick Played by light on our minds, Simple diffraction is all, Or so science said, What colour the sky, If watch from above, From the eye of a child, Or when shared with one loved, What colour is it for us, I don't know, I am not they How should I know? What visions they see, Precisely. |
Missing you by me
Holding you close by my side Together Complete BK ------------------ http://publish.hometown.aol.com/tobb...emonknight.gif The Black Storm Cloud of the Night Consort to a Queen Champion of Truth, Justice and Cloudy's Way Captain of the Knights of the Golden Dragons Heart, Mind, and Soul Offical Wizard and Warrior Questioner |
Twighlight Zone
As the night pays a visit for the next 12 hours I await till she settles and shows her family I look upon the greeting sky with astonishment and smile For it makes me remember who I love the most The stars lift me along with the wind that passes me by They lift me high enough to give me thought And all I think is her... Her lovely hair Her comforting smile Her smooth hands Her innocent eyes They astound me, as I feel the breeze I want to share more I want to be with her more I want to hold her hand I want to kiss her lips I want to show how much I care... I am not rich Nor am I poor But I want to show her That the best things in life are always FREE I long to share this moment with her... As I gaze upon those lovely little stars I want to call her up and share the serene moment As I listen to her voice Loving her Forevermore... ------------------ http://publish.hometown.aol.com/tobb...es/bahamut.gif I...AM...BAHAMUT...AND IT IS YOU PEOPLE...I FEAR [This message has been edited by Bahamut (edited 04-11-2001).] |
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thanx a lot wolfie!!!
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bumping for people to see and write!!!!
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this is a poem, (not written by me):
When Huang Yao Shi heard his daughter's death god places fate on everyone, how hard it is for one to decide or pass away with grey hair, or meet one's end when giving a birth (I am) still not yet recovered from (my) first lose (#1), and a new one comes it is like from dawn to sun set, it is like the water transforms into air sigh, I cannot catch up with the dead, and how I feel lost! the heaven is so high, yet there is no step (to reach) the feeling is so painful, yet there is no one (to tell) #1: "first lose" here means the death of his wife, "a new one" means the death of his daughter |
whats with the parenthesis? "(I am)" blahblah "(my)" blahblah
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() means the words within does not come with the poem, but it makes sense to add them when read it.
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