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06-03-2001, 02:19 PM
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Thoth - Egyptian God of Wisdom
 Join Date: March 12, 2001
Location: Birmingham, West Mid\'s, England
Age: 87
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Just read this for the first time RudeDawg. 'Tis good. I'm interested in the characters. Let's see the next part!
I hesitate to offer any criticism, 'cause your fans will slay me...! BUT - I would like to see the story filled out a little more - and you need to do a bit of editing and polishing. However, you have the makings of a very, very good story here. KEEP IT GOING! I can see it getting darker.....! ------------------   
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06-03-2001, 02:24 PM
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20th Level Warrior
 Join Date: April 9, 2001
Location: Dallas, Tx, USA
Age: 55
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It's been too long since I wrote seriously... ah well, that's why I want to post here, to get everyone's input... ------------------  
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