more of my poetry :)

[Stormymystic]

I woud like to thank you guys in the cafe for helping break my writers block, you got me thinking again, which is what i needed [img]smile.gif[/img] so thanks


Because I didn’t love you


Because I didn’t love you,
I had to let you leave.
I tried a whole lifetime,
But it was not meant to be

The day you left my heart,
Will forever leave a hole.
Although I can not love you,
I lost bits of my soul.

I whispered a life of lies
Tore the heart from your chest.
I did not understand it,
On how you tried your best.

Now that you are gone,
I know I was a fool.
To ever pretend to love,
And break the golden rule.

The words you spoke that day,
Showed the wound I had made.
It proved the life I live,
Is lived all in vain.

This day I vow to love,
The person I will meet.
Where ever it shall be,
Shall be forever sweet


edit..is this cool or what, this thread made my 1800th post, as well as breaking my writers block woohoo

[ 10-10-2003, 11:38 PM: Message edited by: Stormymystic ]

[Lady Blue03]

Senior AP Lit and Comp twisted my mind into a poetry analyzing machine [img]tongue.gif[/img]

Good job [img]smile.gif[/img]

[Stormymystic]

Originally posted by Lady Blue03: Senior AP Lit and Comp twisted my mind into a poetry analyzing machine [img]tongue.gif[/img] Good job [img]smile.gif[/img]

thanks [img]smile.gif[/img]

[Night Stalker]

pretty nice Stormy!

LB, if you still like poetry after having it crammed into you in class, check out my thread at the Oasis. (I know - shameless plug [img]tongue.gif[/img] ) Most you might have seen in class, but there might be some gems you haven't seen yet.

[Mack_Attack]

Wtg Stormy that is very good. Have you been writing long.

[Stormymystic]

Originally posted by Mack_Attack: Wtg Stormy that is very good. Have you been writing long.

off and on since I was 11