a poem I wrote for myself... :D

250 · 11-13-2001, 11:01 AM

Mircale of the Fall, the Fateful Day

In a sunny briday day of the fall
He walked into a store where she worked
He was looking but not finding
Body and soul, She was healing

He saw her, in that fateful moment
She was helding a pen and a stack of paper
Her innocent eyes, sweet smile and gentle movement
His soul was lifted, that might be it!

On the mircale day of the fall, they met
Life forever changed and changing it still
He fell in love deeply
with a person who cannot return the same emotion

He loves still, gently and faithfully
For he found what she had lost
He treasures that spirit
Like his own, lost and wandering

He was looking for something
She was looking for something
They didn't find it from the other
A life long lesson taught by God

They are the questions, for eachother
The answer lies in our heart
For we all must learn to love ourselves
Before we can love the others

On a bright day of the fall,
fate changed her and his lives
The moment they walked into eachother
Each another day is a mircale

[ 11-13-2001: Message edited by: 250 ]

Talthyr Malkaviel · 11-13-2001, 11:03 AM

*applauds* well done, great poem 250

250 · 11-13-2001, 11:04 AM

quote:
Originally posted by Talthyr Malkaviel:
*applauds* well done, great poem 250

thank you thank you!!!

thanks a lot! [img]smile.gif[/img]

Sir Byronas · 11-13-2001, 11:20 AM

Bravo, bravo, bravo 250! Great poem.

250 · 11-13-2001, 11:28 AM

quote:
Originally posted by Sir Byronas:
Bravo, bravo, bravo 250! Great poem.

tyty [img]smile.gif[/img] self-encouragement... haha [img]tongue.gif[/img]

DragonMage · 11-13-2001, 11:28 AM

You never cease to amaze me, 'son' of mine.

That is very touching. Beautiful poem. *sniffle* Now go get Momma a hanky.

*HUGS*

250 · 11-13-2001, 11:30 AM

quote:
Originally posted by DragonMage:
You never cease to amaze me, 'son' of mine.

That is very touching. Beautiful poem. *sniffle* Now go get Momma a hanky.

*HUGS*

awww...

sigh, I've been here seven months and twenty three days, and now I have two extra fathers, three extra moms... LOL

anyways, thank you mom! I love you too [img]smile.gif[/img]

Legolas · 11-13-2001, 11:45 AM

I'm happy for you [img]smile.gif[/img]
I like the poem, you're a good writer, Leo.
(Plus, I'm happy I don't have to write four pages on the shape and content of this poem, writer's intentions and so on [img]smile.gif[/img] )

250 · 11-13-2001, 11:50 AM

quote:
Originally posted by Legolas:
I'm happy for you [img]smile.gif[/img]
I like the poem, you're a good writer, Leo.
(Plus, I'm happy I don't have to write four pages on the shape and content of this poem, writer's intentions and so on [img]smile.gif[/img] )

not really a talent, just enegeries inspired by love and (sometimes) depression

thanks a lot for the support! [img]tongue.gif[/img] what about ... four pages?

[ 11-13-2001: Message edited by: 250 ]

250 · 11-13-2001, 03:29 PM

wahhhhhhhhh, I am da maturestest!!!

11-13-2001, 11:03 AM	#2
Talthyr Malkaviel Ma'at - Goddess of Truth & Justice Join Date: August 31, 2001 Location: Land of the Britons Age: 37 Posts: 3,224	applauds well done, great poem 250 __________________ Resident cantankerous sorcerer of the Clan HADB<br />and Sorcerous Nuttella salesman of the O.R.T<br /> <br /><br />Say NO to the Trouser Tyranny! Can I drill you about this?

11-13-2001, 11:04 AM	#3
250 Horus - Egyptian Sky God Join Date: March 4, 2001 Location: either CA or MO Age: 42 Posts: 2,674	quote: Originally posted by Talthyr Malkaviel: applauds well done, great poem 250 thank you thank you!!! thanks a lot! [img]smile.gif[/img]

11-13-2001, 11:20 AM	#4
Sir Byronas Mephistopheles Join Date: October 2, 2001 Location: Greece Age: 35 Posts: 1,463	Bravo, bravo, bravo 250! Great poem. __________________ <br />I\'ve searched the whole world and ended up back in Ironworks. Home sweet home!

11-13-2001, 11:28 AM	#5
250 Horus - Egyptian Sky God Join Date: March 4, 2001 Location: either CA or MO Age: 42 Posts: 2,674	quote: Originally posted by Sir Byronas: Bravo, bravo, bravo 250! Great poem. tyty [img]smile.gif[/img] self-encouragement... haha [img]tongue.gif[/img]

11-13-2001, 11:28 AM	#6
DragonMage 20th Level Warrior Join Date: September 6, 2001 Location: The lighter side of life, a.k.a. Newnan, Georgia Age: 55 Posts: 2,767	You never cease to amaze me, 'son' of mine. That is very touching. Beautiful poem. sniffle Now go get Momma a hanky. HUGS __________________ [img]\"http://home.earthlink.net/~moraine_sedai/_uimages/dragonmage.gif\" alt=\" - \" /> [img]\"ubb/noncgi/smiles/hero2.gif\" alt=\" - \" /> <br />Alureth...Dragon friend of Lady Breanna<br /><br />Co-Owner/Operator of the Evil Petting Zoo and devout member of the HADB clan.<br />Commander of the Dragon Fleet, IW Peacekeeping Force<br />Mother Hen of IW and Mage extraordinaire.<br /><br />Utterly in love with my soul mate, Hiram.

11-13-2001, 11:01 AM	#1
250 Horus - Egyptian Sky God Join Date: March 4, 2001 Location: either CA or MO Age: 42 Posts: 2,674	Mircale of the Fall, the Fateful Day In a sunny briday day of the fall He walked into a store where she worked He was looking but not finding Body and soul, She was healing He saw her, in that fateful moment She was helding a pen and a stack of paper Her innocent eyes, sweet smile and gentle movement His soul was lifted, that might be it! On the mircale day of the fall, they met Life forever changed and changing it still He fell in love deeply with a person who cannot return the same emotion He loves still, gently and faithfully For he found what she had lost He treasures that spirit Like his own, lost and wandering He was looking for something She was looking for something They didn't find it from the other A life long lesson taught by God They are the questions, for eachother The answer lies in our heart For we all must learn to love ourselves Before we can love the others On a bright day of the fall, fate changed her and his lives The moment they walked into eachother Each another day is a mircale [ 11-13-2001: Message edited by: 250 ]

11-13-2001, 11:30 AM	#7
250 Horus - Egyptian Sky God Join Date: March 4, 2001 Location: either CA or MO Age: 42 Posts: 2,674	quote: Originally posted by DragonMage: You never cease to amaze me, 'son' of mine. That is very touching. Beautiful poem. sniffle Now go get Momma a hanky. HUGS awww... sigh, I've been here seven months and twenty three days, and now I have two extra fathers, three extra moms... LOL anyways, thank you mom! I love you too [img]smile.gif[/img]

11-13-2001, 11:45 AM	#8
Legolas Jack Burton Join Date: March 31, 2001 Location: The zephyr lands beneath the brine. Age: 39 Posts: 5,459	I'm happy for you [img]smile.gif[/img] I like the poem, you're a good writer, Leo. (Plus, I'm happy I don't have to write four pages on the shape and content of this poem, writer's intentions and so on [img]smile.gif[/img] ) __________________ Say NO to the Trouser Tyranny!

11-13-2001, 11:50 AM	#9
250 Horus - Egyptian Sky God Join Date: March 4, 2001 Location: either CA or MO Age: 42 Posts: 2,674	quote: Originally posted by Legolas: I'm happy for you [img]smile.gif[/img] I like the poem, you're a good writer, Leo. (Plus, I'm happy I don't have to write four pages on the shape and content of this poem, writer's intentions and so on [img]smile.gif[/img] ) not really a talent, just enegeries inspired by love and (sometimes) depression thanks a lot for the support! [img]tongue.gif[/img] what about ... four pages? [ 11-13-2001: Message edited by: 250 ]

11-13-2001, 03:29 PM	#10
250 Horus - Egyptian Sky God Join Date: March 4, 2001 Location: either CA or MO Age: 42 Posts: 2,674	wahhhhhhhhh, I am da maturestest!!!

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