A Short Piece of Ficton by Me - Page 3

Elif Godson · 09-22-2001, 11:38 PM

You done good, if you wrote this at such a young age I can only
imagine what may come from you later. Keep it up.

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Lurking in the shadow's of your dreams,the Ruby Rouge of the ALSB:2gunfire:

Slayer of Pest's in Cloudy's Cafe'

Jafin · 09-23-2001, 12:35 AM

Lioness... This is amazing, very powerful. It is done amazingly well. You have a gift for writing. As I read your story, I nearly cried. I almost never cry, especially from a writing or some other sort of work of fiction. Lioness, I commend you. This is an amazing work. It's also somewhat frightening. What would a world without love, hope, and companionship be like? Exactly what you wrote. It's very moving. Thank you for sharing this.

-Jafin

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Proud Citizen of the United States of America
The Original Arch-Mage of the HADB
Destroyer of the evil Bunnies
Proprietor of the Boogre Bar
The not-so-secret admirer of Lioness

[This message has been edited by Jafin (edited 09-23-2001).]

Jerome · 09-23-2001, 08:50 AM

*cough cough* BUMP *cough cough*

Well i'll be dammed, how did this get back up here?

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Within the jungle of my deepest emotion,
With a coat resplendant in a golden sheen,
Swiftly hunting my tender love,
Stalks the regal, Feline Queen

Lioness · 09-23-2001, 09:20 AM

Thanx dear.

And I stink at soccer.

(Well, I've never played it, but...)

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Lil' Angel

Sword Saint and Enchantress of the HADB Clan
Waitress at Cloudy's Cafe
Bestest Mate of the Cyan Knight
Lady of Jerome, The Fallen Paladin
Honored Friend of the Warrior SSJ4Sephiroth, and the Arch-Mage Jafin
PeaceKeeping Force, Intelligence Division

Ramon de Ramon y Ramon · 09-23-2001, 09:35 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Jerome:

Hmm, skilled with words, charming, mature.... is there no end to this girls talents?

Yes, indeed, Jerome, it is way too late to run and hide, she has got your number - and with each hidden talent she reveals she will only entangle you more and more into her web.

Silky-Paws: compared to you Isaac Asimov was just an ignoramus and bungler !

(But maybe, if you really want to take up writing as a regular activity, instead of listening to me, the notorious flatterer and teaser, you should listen more to someone like our cherished Miss Fljotsdale who offers you such a wonderfully balanced feedback of constructive criticism and well-deserved praise.

)

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So long !

R³ aka "The Ramonster"(thanks Sir Tainly) - proud to be the official spokesman for the most noble Lady Bilqis, Desert Rose of Ironworks

Btw, the cow is queuing in the slaughterhouse right now !

Lioness · 09-23-2001, 09:37 AM

Thank You R3!

*hugs*
Maybe, I don't feel like writing just yet.

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Lil' Angel

Sword Saint and Enchantress of the HADB Clan
Waitress at Cloudy's Cafe
Bestest Mate of the Cyan Knight
Lady of Jerome, The Fallen Paladin
Honored Friend of the Warrior SSJ4Sephiroth, and the Arch-Mage Jafin
PeaceKeeping Force, Intelligence Division

Jerome · 09-23-2001, 09:43 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Lioness:
Thanx dear. And I stink at soccer. (Well, I've never played it, but...)

Well, we're not perfect.... though I'm willing to make a exception for yourself...

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Within the jungle of my deepest emotion,
With a coat resplendant in a golden sheen,
Swiftly hunting my tender love,
Stalks the regal, Feline Queen

Ramon de Ramon y Ramon · 09-24-2001, 10:02 AM

I most firmly believe that our Silky-Paws deserves to be "stroked" some more for this fine piece of work !

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So long !

R³ aka "The Ramonster"(thanks Sir Tainly) - proud to be the official spokesman for the most noble Lady Bilqis, Desert Rose of Ironworks

Btw, the cow is queuing in the slaughterhouse right now !

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09-22-2001, 11:38 PM	#21
Elif Godson Dracolich Join Date: August 28, 2001 Location: Hurricane Valley Age: 51 Posts: 3,089	You done good, if you wrote this at such a young age I can only imagine what may come from you later. Keep it up. ------------------ Lurking in the shadow's of your dreams,the Ruby Rouge of the ALSB:2gunfire: Slayer of Pest's in Cloudy's Cafe'

09-23-2001, 12:35 AM	#22
Jafin Symbol of Cyric Join Date: May 24, 2001 Location: The Lands of Forever Age: 39 Posts: 1,132	Lioness... This is amazing, very powerful. It is done amazingly well. You have a gift for writing. As I read your story, I nearly cried. I almost never cry, especially from a writing or some other sort of work of fiction. Lioness, I commend you. This is an amazing work. It's also somewhat frightening. What would a world without love, hope, and companionship be like? Exactly what you wrote. It's very moving. Thank you for sharing this. -Jafin ------------------ Proud Citizen of the United States of America The Original Arch-Mage of the HADB Destroyer of the evil Bunnies Proprietor of the Boogre Bar The not-so-secret admirer of Lioness [This message has been edited by Jafin (edited 09-23-2001).]

09-23-2001, 08:50 AM	#23
Jerome Knight of the Rose Join Date: January 8, 2001 Location: Scotland Age: 38 Posts: 4,418	cough cough BUMP cough cough Well i'll be dammed, how did this get back up here? ------------------ Within the jungle of my deepest emotion, With a coat resplendant in a golden sheen, Swiftly hunting my tender love, Stalks the regal, Feline Queen

09-23-2001, 09:20 AM	#24
Lioness Jack Burton Join Date: June 3, 2001 Location: Among the Stars Age: 36 Posts: 5,837	Thanx dear. And I stink at soccer. (Well, I've never played it, but...) ------------------ Lil' Angel Sword Saint and Enchantress of the HADB Clan Waitress at Cloudy's Cafe Bestest Mate of the Cyan Knight Lady of Jerome, The Fallen Paladin Honored Friend of the Warrior SSJ4Sephiroth, and the Arch-Mage Jafin PeaceKeeping Force, Intelligence Division

09-23-2001, 09:37 AM	#26
Lioness Jack Burton Join Date: June 3, 2001 Location: Among the Stars Age: 36 Posts: 5,837	Thank You R3! hugs Maybe, I don't feel like writing just yet. ------------------ Lil' Angel Sword Saint and Enchantress of the HADB Clan Waitress at Cloudy's Cafe Bestest Mate of the Cyan Knight Lady of Jerome, The Fallen Paladin Honored Friend of the Warrior SSJ4Sephiroth, and the Arch-Mage Jafin PeaceKeeping Force, Intelligence Division

09-24-2001, 10:02 AM	#28
Ramon de Ramon y Ramon Red Dragon Join Date: March 1, 2001 Location: Cologne, North Rhine-Westphalia, Germany Age: 52 Posts: 1,517	I most firmly believe that our Silky-Paws deserves to be "stroked" some more for this fine piece of work ! ------------------ So long ! R³ aka "The Ramonster"(thanks Sir Tainly) - proud to be the official spokesman for the most noble Lady Bilqis, Desert Rose of Ironworks Btw, the cow is queuing in the slaughterhouse right now !

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