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Old 03-11-2001, 10:26 PM   #41
Gabriel
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A shattered mind,
thinking in tangents,
a spark into fire,
losing the thread,
lossed the plot,
can't concentrate,
Mind wonders,
no answers only questions,
inpersonal,
avoided,
no help,
words, meaning lost,
slience,
perhaps it is best.
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Old 03-11-2001, 10:30 PM   #42
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Griever I only just noticed that it only two words per line.

oh WHERE IS EVERYONE ELSES POEMS!!!!!!! COME ON. Or I'm going to post again and again with crude verses.
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Old 03-11-2001, 10:33 PM   #43
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There you are Gabriel! Where've you been?!! Check our our story thread, Stealthy didn't show up, so it's your turn! I added a bit to it.

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Old 03-11-2001, 10:37 PM   #44
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the distraught heart
wanders
wanders into space
walking blindy
walking gently
waving for someone to see
waving for someone to help
wailing for someone to hear
wailing for someone to care
weaving itself for beauty
weaving itself so it pleases the eye
wandering still
waving still
wailing still
weaving still
wondering
where could have all the people gone?

there! now ya happy? you forced me to think!

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Old 03-11-2001, 10:45 PM   #45
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Sorry griver but you now what they say, first times always the hardest.
Good poem. How do you come up with them?
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Old 03-11-2001, 10:50 PM   #46
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i wanted to try something new. i incorporated your writing style, you know, the two-three word punch? hehe...

as for coming up with them, i just think impromptu. i usually start with a phrase and work from there...

well, thats impromptu number three:the distraught heart.

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Old 03-11-2001, 11:14 PM   #47
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Griever, our styles aren't that different, mine are usally inspared by a word or thought and are normal written down first time in the post box.
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Old 03-12-2001, 10:11 AM   #48
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yep! or how bout a thought? just think of one thing, and these emotions start to develop.. lots of 'em that you can formulate into poetry...

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Old 03-12-2001, 07:36 PM   #49
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Standing alone,
in a crowd of friends,
Know to all,
Yet unknow at heart,
Being what they want,
But not me,
So long a copy,
I lost myself ,
I'm a pretender,
A fake,
A shadow of peers,
Yet alone I am,
What am I?
WHAT AM I?

(Hmmmmm....... Not the best I ever done, but probably the oddest.)
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Old 03-12-2001, 11:44 PM   #50
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wow... like a riddle and poem, and pissed off man all in one!

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