04-22-2003, 11:25 AM | #1 |
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Please tell my kids
Please tell my kids, I love them, I love them with all of my heart. I am sorry for what happened, and that we have to be apart. Please tell my kids i am with them, where ever they are, and if they ever miss me, to find me in the stars. please tell my kids today, that i did not want to die, before getting to tell them i love them and please do not cry. please tell my kids i am happy, and in gods loving arms, and that someday they may join me, to be safe from all lifes harms. Please tell my kids tomorrow, that they meant the world to me, and that i will always know them, and their lives i will always see Copyright ©2003 [ 04-22-2003, 11:26 AM: Message edited by: Stormymystic ]
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What a sweet (and slightly depressing) poem. Between this and a song I heard on the TV this Morning that Madonna wrote to her Mom (who I guess died when she was younger based on the song) what a sad, yet beautiful, poetic morning
Seriously, though, very beautiful.
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04-22-2003, 12:24 PM | #4 |
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Very nice... sad but nice.
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04-22-2003, 06:16 PM | #5 |
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Wow...very touching...beautiful as well...you have talent! A sombre note, though. But very good, very good...
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04-22-2003, 06:20 PM | #6 |
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You're a great poet Stormy, beautiful work indeed [img]graemlins/readingbook.gif[/img]
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04-22-2003, 06:28 PM | #7 |
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thank you, i know it is sad, but it wasalmost published
and i am proud of it
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it was fantastic Stormy=)
very sad tough it is now about 2 hours since i read it and im still thinking of it great work do more in the future if you want i would love to read them
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