WOLFGIR

TheThing · 03-18-2002, 05:35 AM

I just read your peom at your homepage "Kiss your tears away" darn, thats beautiful, do you mind post it here for us to read? [img]smile.gif[/img]

[ 03-18-2002, 05:48 AM: Message edited by: TheThing ]

TheThing · 03-18-2002, 05:39 AM

and I am a little curious as how you came up with this poem? my guess is that the result of a life experience... sorry if I ask too much, because if it is true, I have a similar understanding here [img]smile.gif[/img]

anyway, awesome work

WOLFGIR · 03-18-2002, 05:49 AM

He, no problem! Glad you liked it and that I have people visiting my page!

LOL

Yes, it is based on a life experience, a pretty sad event in my life which I still need to work over from time to time and which still gives me reason to stop and think things trough. I actually started to write more and use it as a way to express things for myself as a result of people from this board.

Well here it is..
-----------------------------------------------
Kiss your tears away.

When you were in pain, I tried to kiss away your tears..
I tried to reveal your beauty for the world to see.

I kissed your tears, and in the process you took mine away.
I kissed away your tears, cause your pain was mine.

I held you in the dark, shivering so close to me.
Oh, darling did I hold you to tight?

Today I lie in the dark, clasping myself,
crying but no tears come and none to kiss.

I believe you a vampire, cause you sucked me dry.
Oh darling, did I hold you to tight?

I only tried to kiss away the pain..

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TheThing · 03-18-2002, 05:55 AM

cool [img]smile.gif[/img] glad that you find ways to express yourself, the stuffed feelings are dangerous sometimes [img]tongue.gif[/img]

I also read one poem that touched me deeply, which I could not remember the whole excerpt. I do, however, remember the lines that hit me the most:

"...
I am sorry that
I love you too much,
yet I do not love you enough"

It feels just like that some times. Thanks for posting. I like your poem a lot.

WOLFGIR · 03-18-2002, 06:06 AM

I think that expressing one self is important for your own developement and should be tried by everyone regardless of "professional" attitude or skills. I am a "happy" amateur when it comes to writing but I´m learning and a good side effet is that I learn more english for each day!

Who said internet is evil?? Hehehe! [img]tongue.gif[/img]

Redblueflare · 03-18-2002, 09:08 AM

Hey that is good Wolfgir! Did you ever finish that story you were writing? I need to read the rest of it sometime.

[ 03-18-2002, 09:08 AM: Message edited by: Redblueflare ]

WOLFGIR · 03-19-2002, 03:05 AM

Hiya RBF!

Thanks!

Well the story got to the tenth chapter and while it still need some rewriting in certain area I have induldge myself in testing some new stories and ways of writing as well as giving the bladedancers tale sort of a break to gather my thoughts. I have the next chapter forming itself in my head right now. I´m not a disciplined author yet so I write whats in my wierd head and sometimes I don´t have a clue what will happen but just write LOL. But I have it on my website under stories. Ten chapters full of typos

hehe!

03-18-2002, 05:49 AM	#3
WOLFGIR Bastet - Egyptian Cat Goddess Join Date: March 1, 2001 Location: Sweden Age: 50 Posts: 3,450	He, no problem! Glad you liked it and that I have people visiting my page! LOL Yes, it is based on a life experience, a pretty sad event in my life which I still need to work over from time to time and which still gives me reason to stop and think things trough. I actually started to write more and use it as a way to express things for myself as a result of people from this board. Well here it is.. ----------------------------------------------- Kiss your tears away. When you were in pain, I tried to kiss away your tears.. I tried to reveal your beauty for the world to see. I kissed your tears, and in the process you took mine away. I kissed away your tears, cause your pain was mine. I held you in the dark, shivering so close to me. Oh, darling did I hold you to tight? Today I lie in the dark, clasping myself, crying but no tears come and none to kiss. I believe you a vampire, cause you sucked me dry. Oh darling, did I hold you to tight? I only tried to kiss away the pain.. ------------------------------------------------ __________________ Don´t eat the yellow snow

03-18-2002, 06:06 AM	#5
WOLFGIR Bastet - Egyptian Cat Goddess Join Date: March 1, 2001 Location: Sweden Age: 50 Posts: 3,450	I think that expressing one self is important for your own developement and should be tried by everyone regardless of "professional" attitude or skills. I am a "happy" amateur when it comes to writing but I´m learning and a good side effet is that I learn more english for each day! Who said internet is evil?? Hehehe! [img]tongue.gif[/img] __________________ Don´t eat the yellow snow

03-18-2002, 09:08 AM	#6
Redblueflare Galvatron Join Date: May 9, 2001 Location: The backwoods in Georgia sigh Age: 39 Posts: 2,151	Hey that is good Wolfgir! Did you ever finish that story you were writing? I need to read the rest of it sometime. [ 03-18-2002, 09:08 AM: Message edited by: Redblueflare ] __________________ <br /><br />\"If you ever need me just whistle, and i\'ll come running. I promise. <img border=\"0\" title=\"\" alt=\"[Smile]\" src=\"smile.gif\" /> <br />Kupo, Kupo! A man can\'t get a sword if he can\'t dance! <img border=\"0\" title=\"\" alt=\"[Big Grin]\" src=\"biggrin.gif\" />

03-19-2002, 03:05 AM	#7
WOLFGIR Bastet - Egyptian Cat Goddess Join Date: March 1, 2001 Location: Sweden Age: 50 Posts: 3,450	Hiya RBF! Thanks! Well the story got to the tenth chapter and while it still need some rewriting in certain area I have induldge myself in testing some new stories and ways of writing as well as giving the bladedancers tale sort of a break to gather my thoughts. I have the next chapter forming itself in my head right now. I´m not a disciplined author yet so I write whats in my wierd head and sometimes I don´t have a clue what will happen but just write LOL. But I have it on my website under stories. Ten chapters full of typos hehe! __________________ Don´t eat the yellow snow

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03-18-2002, 05:35 AM	#1
TheThing Banned User Join Date: March 17, 2002 Location: shadow Posts: 246	I just read your peom at your homepage "Kiss your tears away" darn, thats beautiful, do you mind post it here for us to read? [img]smile.gif[/img] [ 03-18-2002, 05:48 AM: Message edited by: TheThing ]

03-18-2002, 05:39 AM	#2
TheThing Banned User Join Date: March 17, 2002 Location: shadow Posts: 246	and I am a little curious as how you came up with this poem? my guess is that the result of a life experience... sorry if I ask too much, because if it is true, I have a similar understanding here [img]smile.gif[/img] anyway, awesome work

03-18-2002, 05:55 AM	#4
TheThing Banned User Join Date: March 17, 2002 Location: shadow Posts: 246	cool [img]smile.gif[/img] glad that you find ways to express yourself, the stuffed feelings are dangerous sometimes [img]tongue.gif[/img] I also read one poem that touched me deeply, which I could not remember the whole excerpt. I do, however, remember the lines that hit me the most: "... I am sorry that I love you too much, yet I do not love you enough" It feels just like that some times. Thanks for posting. I like your poem a lot.

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