04-30-2003, 11:49 AM | #41 |
Jack Burton
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Thanks Reeka. [img]smile.gif[/img] (I'm anti-rhyming for myself, anyway. [img]tongue.gif[/img] )
*bump*
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04-30-2003, 02:01 PM | #42 |
Fzoul Chembryl
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IF I WERE A WANDERING BREEZE....
if i were a wandering breeze would you pay me heed would you note my caress upon your face and how i gently put your hair out of place? would you breathe deep the spring time scent i carry and the song of birds ringing clearly? would you stop and hold a moment dear a moment of peace crystal clear? would you try to fllow me as i wander past wishing for our moment to last? would you climb atop the tallest of trees and listen as i play in the leaves? would you call my name with passion when i falter hold my hand and encourage me further? would you watch as i dance with the clouds in the sky wonder at the beauty seen by your mortal eye? would you delight at the butterflies i hold aloft take joy in the magic i have wrought? if i were a wandering breaze would you think of me?
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04-30-2003, 02:07 PM | #43 |
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Pretty good, RevRuby. I like
"would you note my caress upon your face and how i gently put your hair out of place?"
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04-30-2003, 02:12 PM | #44 |
Fzoul Chembryl
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ty attalus!!! it's not my best but i guess that's what i get for being hormonal and emotional.
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04-30-2003, 08:14 PM | #45 |
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Very nice, RevRuby, yes I liked the line Attalus mentioned as well. [img]smile.gif[/img] Pretty descriptions.
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05-01-2003, 11:22 PM | #46 |
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BUMP!
shameless slef promoting! no one will read my new poem if it's on the second page!
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05-03-2003, 09:22 AM | #47 |
Jack Burton
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*bump* for RevRuby's poem as well.
I've brainstormed out some ideas for my novel, hopefully I'll get something up, here or OUAP, for critique. [img]smile.gif[/img]
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05-03-2003, 10:11 AM | #48 |
Jack Burton
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Here is mine!
Heh, warning: bitchy mode, references to Legend of Zelda, and generally, me being a meany
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05-04-2003, 12:16 AM | #49 |
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we are blessed by the gods
the night has our blessing walking around fate's circle playing around with fire's gambling power mystery and intrigue embrace the bodies that are frozen frozen with naivety and fantasy it is time that we are bound to different desires and affections time to bloom and grow into something more desirable and affectionate to make booming fantasies and wishes to reality it is time to take my hand and receive maturity's gifts and wisdom's graces take my hand as we fly to forever's height |
05-04-2003, 12:35 AM | #50 |
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this poem is based on the birth of my son, who weighed 1lb and 14 1/2 ounces when he was born he was small enough that you hand would cver his whole body, and you could see inside of him through his skin. do not fret he is alive and well now
A poem for my hero When he was born they said he would die he was so small and could bearly cry when i first saw him it broke my heart never did i hold him and it tore me apart I stayed by his side as long I dared to whisper his name in song and prayer as the weeks grew longer he slowly grew older from August to December he was a brave soldier I spoke his name to him everyday and translated his name as brave beyond praise he has grown to be four but the pain we still share for every day is a trial and is used with great care
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