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Thoth - Egyptian God of Wisdom
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You have captured the atmosphere and feeling beautifully, Lioness, and draw a very vivid picture. You should certainly continue writing.
I felt at times that the continuity of some things could be improved, but that is all, and you will certainly do that as you gain experience. You have the definite makings of a very talented writer in my opinion. An excellent story and very deserving of the high marks! ------------------  
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09-19-2001, 10:48 AM
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Thoth - Egyptian God of Wisdom
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09-19-2001, 10:50 AM
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Cool. But sooo very very lonnng.....
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Thoth - Egyptian God of Wisdom
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09-19-2001, 02:14 PM
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Lioness, I enjoyed your story! You should write more you seem to have the gift for it! Thank you for posting it-Pauly
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09-19-2001, 03:25 PM
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Ironworks Atomic Moderator
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Indeed, I loved your story as well Lioness. You have an incredible talent for writing, I am truly impressed! Wow!! Please try to take time out to write more stories, as we would love to read them someday!
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09-19-2001, 04:55 PM
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That was a wonderful story Lioness. You are truly gifted and unusually intelligent. Thank you for sharing it with us. Feel free to post anymore you've written.... it's brilliant stuff
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09-22-2001, 10:15 PM
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Ironworks Atomic Moderator
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Bump!
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09-22-2001, 10:17 PM
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Jack Burton
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Thanx!
Thanz you Lady Z. My search went all wrong. ------------------  Lil' Angel  Sword Saint and Enchantress of the HADB Clan Waitress at Cloudy's Cafe Bestest Mate of the Cyan Knight Lady of Jerome, The Fallen Paladin Honored Friend of the Warrior SSJ4Sephiroth, and the Arch-Mage Jafin |
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09-22-2001, 10:18 PM
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Knight of the Rose
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Bugger. It's people like you that make me ashamed of my writing. Especially since you're younger than me.
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