06-28-2001, 11:41 PM | #1 |
20th Level Warrior
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Kiwidoc refers to my poetry as "teenage agnst crap", (Even tho I am WELL out of my teens) and I must admit... I usually write pretty morbid stuff...
At the risk of losing my reputation as a BAD-@$$... Recently, I was asked to describe love. I decided not to think about it, and THIS is what I felt... Once, while walking through a field I found a flower, and looked inside I found you Once, while walking through a forest I found a tree, and looked inside I found you Once, while walking on a beach I found a shell, and looked inside I found you Once, while walking through a dream I found my heart, and looked inside I found you ------------------ The RudeDawg, known in these Forgotten Realms as Perin LightEyes "Let them come, Let them ALL come." -"Ender says, 'The enemy is down.' " [This message has been edited by RudeDawg (edited 06-28-2001).] [This message has been edited by RudeDawg (edited 06-29-2001).] [This message has been edited by RudeDawg (edited 06-29-2001).] |
06-28-2001, 11:47 PM | #2 | |
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WOW!!!Too LATE! RudeDAWG the Bada$$ is gone forever! That is intense!
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06-28-2001, 11:50 PM | #3 |
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You risked it...you lost it.
You are no longer a bad a$$, but a sweet mooshy wooshy puppy dawg! Sweet stuff there...I would hope to read it a card addressed to me someday...stamped with the official Hallmark seal of course! Thanks for sharing that RudeDawg! Love your new sig BTW! Moni ------------------ |
06-28-2001, 11:54 PM | #4 |
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oh, how cute.. ::acts like he's gonna slit a neck:: ...Just kiddin, Yep, you lost your B@D-@$$ touch man...gone...forever
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06-28-2001, 11:59 PM | #5 |
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That poem made me cry, RD... it is beautiful
I am indeed fortunate to know you. ------------------ Defender for the Light - Goodness knows there is a lot of Dark out there!! - Where are my matches?!? Wandering Soul - Finding my life's calling is Bodhisattva You are what your deep driving desire is; As your deep driving desire is, so is your will; As your will is so is your deed; As your deed is so is your destiny. The Upanishads [This message has been edited by Charean (edited 06-29-2001).] |
06-29-2001, 12:10 AM | #6 |
Ma'at - Goddess of Truth & Justice
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Pleasantly surprised Rudy. The heart of a poet in there somewhere. Who would have thoought?
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06-29-2001, 12:23 AM | #7 |
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Sweet Dawg, yes I'm sorry, I'll only call you BAD DAWG in the game when you drag us into lich headquarters at low levels!
This is so pretty...so... sweet...so ...sigh..*whisper* you! Ok, I'll not shout it...but I think everyone can see it! BadA$$? uh uh...lost that...at least for now ! Perin's gonna need a fresh dose of attitude to survive out in the wilds now! Clouds ------------------ Raindancer of the Laughing Hyenas Clan Storm-Queen StormCloud of the Black Knight: Heart Mind Soul Forever "To sleep, perchance to dream..." [This message has been edited by Cloudbringer (edited 06-29-2001).] |
06-29-2001, 01:12 AM | #8 |
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Great poem man!
Your the only person I know that is compatible with a Baddas reputation and a Lover boy reputation! ------------------ So if in the forest look behind you, because that where the ranger is going to be |
06-29-2001, 01:18 AM | #9 |
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I think your reputation as a Bad @$$ is in jeopardy! You're gonna have to work hard to get it back! Maybe you should change your name from Rudedawg to.... hmmm.... let's see...... Kind, honest, friendly-dawg! ::Backs away from Rudedawg's glare:: Okay, maybe not, Rudedawg sounds better anyway!
-Jafin ------------------ I am Jafin, arch-mage of the HADB clan! |
06-29-2001, 01:53 AM | #10 |
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Well, as long as y'all realize that I can still kick y'all around...
I am fully assured of my "BaddestAss of the BadAsses" title... And, so... I 'm posting another one... Riding With the WindAs she's walking through the clouds with a circus smile running wild... - Jimmi Hendrix, Little Wing How often I have surfed the skies, Searching, always, for the flame gone from my heart How often I have walked the oceans, Seeking, always, the stars stolen from my heart How often I have flown through the meadows, Looking, always, for the flowers lost from my heart How often I have ridden the wind, Longing, always, for the love torn from my heart Only to find it here In the places I never searched Only to hold it dear In my arms, to my face How often I have searched the world, Riding the wind, Needing that which is missing, still. From my heart ------------------ The RudeDawg, known in these Forgotten Realms as Perin LightEyes "Let them come, Let them ALL come." -"Ender says, 'The enemy is down.' " [This message has been edited by RudeDawg (edited 06-29-2001).] |
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