Fragments of Humanity, Sanctuary II

[kiwidoc]

If

If
I stayed
beneath the steady
drip, drip of slowly
falling acid rain until my
silent, hollow soul
dissolved away ...
would you even
notice?


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[This message has been edited by kiwidoc (edited 06-24-2001).]

[Sharpedge]

kiwidoc... evoking a very focused and concentrated piece of emotion there. Excellent. Keep them coming people.

oh and...*bump*

[Djinn Raffo]

Musphel feelings,
like ants on an old plum tree,
Infinite string.

[Reeka]

Almost sounds like Haiku, Djinn

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[Djinn Raffo]

Originally posted by Reeka: Almost sounds like Haiku, Djinn

This is what I try for, pleasant Reeka.
I can't remember correctly if it's 5 syllables, then 7, then 5. But this is
how I do it. Yes, even though I might sometimes throw in the extra syllable here and there...artistic licence baby!

[Bahamut]

kiwidoc, you have summarized a poem of mine that is very long!

fragments
of my humanity
scattered
shattered
into pieces the naked eye could not see
taken by someone else
stolen
from me
i feel my very self
dissolving into thin air
as i try to regain my soul
it is all but too
late

shit.. that needs a lot of work.. anyway, just wanted to bump it sorta

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Yukishiro Tomoe

[Reeka]

Bumping for Ryan, et. al.

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[Gridlock]

written together with "My Shoelaces and More", inspired by the very lively (yawn) speaker.

SLOW DEATH

The voice drones on and on
On and on
Like the pesky buzzing of the bees
Buzzing in your ear
You can’t do anything but try to live with it
And slowly get annoyed
Frustrated
The mind tries to fly away
With the clouds that seem to have nowhere to go
The eyes focus on some poor inanimate object
That if it could talk would say
“Take a picture. It lasts longer.”
Inevitably we’re back to the voice
The voice that drones
And drones
In meaningless monotone
Until you decide
To just die a slow death
Death by boredom

Oh yeah... bump bump ba-dump

[Bahamut]

hey! speaking of a slow death, have you heard something about the abu sayaf on how the decapitate the guy?

they make the guy sorta lie down, then they will step on the head and start sawing the head off!!!!

I HOPE THAT IS NOT TRUE, but in this part of the world, high tech equipment doesnt exist, and with their funding, how do you think they would cut the persons head off? jesus...

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Yukishiro Tomoe

[Jerome]

Sorry i havent been on much, moving house, school etc... been stealing all my time online , so heres a little poem i wrote to let you know how i felt without all you guys!

Lonleliness (sp)

Here amongst these faceless statues,
You wander, all alone,
Here amonst the other casulties,
From the darkest dreads you've sown.

In and out there empty presence,
You wander, all alone,
Trapped with only the swirling shadows,
Of your isolation, that has grown.

Running from their pleading hands,
You wander, all alone
Fleeing from their motionless lips,
Which emit a heartless groan.

Here amongst these wraith-like figures,
You wander, all alone,
With only the tiniest spark of freedom lurking,
Hidden deep yet never shown.

Running from their peircing eyes,
You wander, all alone
Judged by these uncaring eyes,
By pupils, set in stone.

Trapped within this stony prison,
With fear worse than you've ever known,
Confined with only these mocking statues,
To forever wander...all alone.


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Jerome, Chairperson Of The International Fluffy Hunting Society