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10-01-2001, 02:19 PM
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Red Wizard of Thay
 Join Date: August 21, 2001
Location: Limburg, Netherlands, Europe
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***BUMP***
------------------  http://www.angelfire.com/rpg2/miracI'd be Mirac, mighty mage of er... uhm.. er.. - Mirac Honorguard Fellow Table Dancer of the Jerome's Table dancer group Spell formulater of the IW peace-keeping force |
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10-06-2001, 02:04 PM
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Red Wizard of Thay
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****BUMP****** (ouch, that actually hurt
 )------------------ http://www.angelfire.com/rpg2/miracI'd be Mirac, mighty mage of er... uhm.. er.. - Mirac Honorguard Fellow Table Dancer of the Jerome's Table dancer group Spell formulater of the IW peace-keeping force |
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10-09-2001, 05:18 PM
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Red Wizard of Thay
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********BUMP!!!!!!!********* (got to stop doing that
 )------------------ http://www.angelfire.com/rpg2/miracI'd be Mirac, mighty mage of er... uhm.. er.. - Mirac Honorguard Fellow Table Dancer of the Jerome's Table dancer group Spell formulater of the IW peace-keeping force Magical advisor of MiLady Lioness |
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10-09-2001, 05:27 PM
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Thoth - Egyptian God of Wisdom
 Join Date: August 16, 2001
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I'll bump it for you. My story is up, anyway.
I agree, a bit more description, like where they are, what they look like and what they are doing. And all the names are confusing! But it is still very good! 
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10-09-2001, 05:32 PM
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I like it very much, Mirac. Ga zo door, zou ik zeggen
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10-09-2001, 06:12 PM
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Red Wizard of Thay
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Thanks guys and girls
 You're like a moral boost for me (well moral boost as in writing ) THANKS!!!!!!! ------------------ http://www.angelfire.com/rpg2/miracI'd be Mirac, mighty mage of er... uhm.. er.. - Mirac Honorguard Fellow Table Dancer of the Jerome's Table dancer group Spell formulater of the IW peace-keeping force Magical advisor of MiLady Lioness |
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10-09-2001, 06:37 PM
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Mirac, great start to your story. I had to read it twice to absorb it all. Very well thought. Mybe stretch the "salt" of your story out just a bit. I am not real qualified to tell you how but I know that your story could get me swayed very easy
Write on..or was that right on! ------------------  *\Conan/*
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