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***BUMP***
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****BUMP****** (ouch, that actually hurt
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********BUMP!!!!!!!********* (got to stop doing that
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I'll bump it for you. My story is up, anyway.
I agree, a bit more description, like where they are, what they look like and what they are doing. And all the names are confusing! But it is still very good! ![]() |
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I like it very much, Mirac. Ga zo door, zou ik zeggen
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Thanks guys and girls
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Mirac, great start to your story. I had to read it twice to absorb it all. Very well thought. Mybe stretch the "salt" of your story out just a bit. I am not real qualified to tell you how but I know that your story could get me swayed very easy
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