Read My Story!!!

Willard · 08-16-2002, 02:54 PM

Well, while IW was down I got around to writing a story. [img]smile.gif[/img] The link to it is here . I hope you enjoy it!

Calaethis Dragonsbane · 08-16-2002, 03:13 PM

very nice willard

, read to the begining of chap one...one thing... why didnt she kill them? a pair of 17 yr olds?! and how did they know what was what? (Ie girdle of hill giant str) not trying to critise u or anything... nice story.

Willard · 08-16-2002, 05:33 PM

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Originally posted by Calaethis Dragonsbane:
very nice willard , read to the begining of chap one...one thing... why didnt she kill them? a pair of 17 yr olds?! and how did they know what was what? (Ie girdle of hill giant str) not trying to critise u or anything... nice story.

He knew because he had seen one before.... he is a servant, he helps clean the whole palace , so he sees a lot of stuff. They had been in that room before, because they recognized the markings on the door. Etc. etc.... [img]tongue.gif[/img]

She didn't kill them because Almun was shapechanged into a water elemental. He was immune to water-based attacks and spell effects. Glathora is a priest of Talos, therefore most of her spells are water-based, except for a few. She did not kill them the second time because everything was so hectic in the room: priests jumping around, magic spells bouncing off walls, magic fizzling, special Talos magic urns collapsing- that sort of thing. After Almun destroyed the urn, Glathora had no reason to be there anymore because the ritual was broken. With the magic bouncing around, with a chance o hitting her, and Almun walking about the room with a big fancy sword whacking people, she decided to leave, and so she teleported away.

TheGrandSlayer · 08-16-2002, 06:03 PM

Great story!Keep doing it!

Willard · 08-16-2002, 07:13 PM

Thanks dude.

Calaethis Dragonsbane · 08-16-2002, 07:19 PM

makes more sence now Wil, good story

Willard · 08-16-2002, 07:25 PM

I thought you'd like it, Calaethis, it has a lot to do with elves.

Almun: Half-elf
Bertrand: Elf
Whoever: Elf
Nobody Cares: Elf

See? There are a lot of Elves in the story, believe me.

See Almun's Character Sheet Thing!

[ 08-16-2002, 07:28 PM: Message edited by: Willard ]

Calaethis Dragonsbane · 08-16-2002, 07:59 PM

whos nobody cares?! lol, ELVES RULE!

[img]tongue.gif[/img]

Willard · 08-19-2002, 10:06 PM

Bump into a slim jim. [img]tongue.gif[/img]

Wilbur · 08-19-2002, 10:11 PM

That's a really cool thing of Keldorn you have Willard.

08-16-2002, 02:54 PM	#1
Willard Fzoul Chembryl Join Date: June 14, 2001 Location: Vermont Age: 34 Posts: 1,752	Well, while IW was down I got around to writing a story. [img]smile.gif[/img] The link to it is here . I hope you enjoy it! __________________

08-16-2002, 03:13 PM	#2
Calaethis Dragonsbane Legion Symbol Join Date: May 29, 2002 Location: Somewhere in between Age: 40 Posts: 7,029	very nice willard , read to the begining of chap one...one thing... why didnt she kill them? a pair of 17 yr olds?! and how did they know what was what? (Ie girdle of hill giant str) not trying to critise u or anything... nice story. __________________ Skydracgrrl: Cruelty, thy name is Cal! --- There are none so blind as those who refuse to see, none so deaf as those who refuse to hear, and none so smelly as those who refuse to bathe.

08-16-2002, 06:03 PM	#4
TheGrandSlayer Red Wizard of Thay Join Date: October 5, 2001 Location: In front of my computer Age: 34 Posts: 860	Great story!Keep doing it! __________________ [img]\"http://www.thepunishermerchandise.com/television/amazing_spider-man/animated_punisher.gif\" alt=\" - \" /><br />\"Hey Mr.Smith!\"<br />\"Dave...\"<br />\"SPACKER Dave!\"

08-16-2002, 07:13 PM	#5
Willard Fzoul Chembryl Join Date: June 14, 2001 Location: Vermont Age: 34 Posts: 1,752	Thanks dude. __________________

08-16-2002, 07:19 PM	#6
Calaethis Dragonsbane Legion Symbol Join Date: May 29, 2002 Location: Somewhere in between Age: 40 Posts: 7,029	makes more sence now Wil, good story __________________ Skydracgrrl: Cruelty, thy name is Cal! --- There are none so blind as those who refuse to see, none so deaf as those who refuse to hear, and none so smelly as those who refuse to bathe.

08-16-2002, 07:25 PM	#7
Willard Fzoul Chembryl Join Date: June 14, 2001 Location: Vermont Age: 34 Posts: 1,752	I thought you'd like it, Calaethis, it has a lot to do with elves. Almun: Half-elf Bertrand: Elf Whoever: Elf Nobody Cares: Elf See? There are a lot of Elves in the story, believe me. See Almun's Character Sheet Thing! [ 08-16-2002, 07:28 PM: Message edited by: Willard ] __________________

08-16-2002, 07:59 PM	#8
Calaethis Dragonsbane Legion Symbol Join Date: May 29, 2002 Location: Somewhere in between Age: 40 Posts: 7,029	whos nobody cares?! lol, ELVES RULE! [img]tongue.gif[/img] __________________ Skydracgrrl: Cruelty, thy name is Cal! --- There are none so blind as those who refuse to see, none so deaf as those who refuse to hear, and none so smelly as those who refuse to bathe.

08-19-2002, 10:06 PM	#9
Willard Fzoul Chembryl Join Date: June 14, 2001 Location: Vermont Age: 34 Posts: 1,752	Bump into a slim jim. [img]tongue.gif[/img] __________________

08-19-2002, 10:11 PM	#10
Wilbur Zhentarim Guard Join Date: May 25, 2002 Location: Centerville, Ohio Age: 37 Posts: 374	That's a really cool thing of Keldorn you have Willard.

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