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Originally posted by sirgwayne:
hey all I am not much of a novelist but some of you are and any closure to
this piece I started would be nice I made it for my wife and I thought it would
be neat to e-mail it to her kinda on a romantic thingy so here it is if anyone
would like to add to it for me that would be neat if not thats cool to
I find myself gasping lowering myself slowly into the gaping
Bedrock hole pure blackness permiates out from within the crevis.
If it were not for the Magical blade dangling from my waist I
would not be able to see one foot in front of mine own eyes.
The odor overwhelms my senses 20ft into the black canyon,and
the true nature of it's evilness becomes more than a reality.
The smell is thickening and the odor of dead corpses rushes me as
an onslaugth of images of former beasts I have battled fall way short
of this deed that lays before me this day. For I know my failure
means certain destruction of the land, and the loss of my true love
"Lady Cher" This will not happen I assure myself! "my blade will be quick
and true on this day"..
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You want this pretty short, or does it not matter? I can get about 2 chapters out of it for right now, maybe 3.
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