Great job so far i say. Mabe for a plot how Rusty helps Fayetha stop the abuse? And for the conflict facing whoever is doing it? Just a couple of suggestion that i thought might help. Its a sad topic though to read about IMHO.
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All blades cut, be they made from metal or wood, but the sharpest and deadliest blade is the one of knowledge.
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