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Man, that's great, Jerome. Your descriptions are vivid and the story reached a great climax. I liked the way it ended as well.
Keep it up! Are you going to continue this one?
Cheers,
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"And all my days are trances, and all my nightly dreams,
Are where thy grey eye glances, and where thy footstep gleams,
In what ethereal dances, by what eternal streams..."
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