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Lucern · 01-20-2005, 01:21 AM

A couple of things, neither especially meaningful nor helpful

On three. effect is a noun, and should replace affect.

I started to do 4...
4. Sociologist Max Weber's work contributed to the idea that the state has a monopoly on violence. When a nation conscripts its citizens into military service,

But then I realized how much I use the context of the piece to write an introduction. The first sentence, for example, could be completely inappropriate to the rest of the work. Besides, working that into your points would take some dexterity that I don't have at the moment lol. Maybe it'll give you an idea at least.

If not, Bungleau has done half of it anyway hehe.

01-20-2005, 01:21 AM	#5
Lucern Quintesson Join Date: August 28, 2004 Location: the middle of Michigan Age: 42 Posts: 1,011	A couple of things, neither especially meaningful nor helpful On three. effect is a noun, and should replace affect. I started to do 4... 4. Sociologist Max Weber's work contributed to the idea that the state has a monopoly on violence. When a nation conscripts its citizens into military service, But then I realized how much I use the context of the piece to write an introduction. The first sentence, for example, could be completely inappropriate to the rest of the work. Besides, working that into your points would take some dexterity that I don't have at the moment lol. Maybe it'll give you an idea at least. If not, Bungleau has done half of it anyway hehe.