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Kaz · 10-09-2001, 05:27 PM

I'll bump it for you. My story is up, anyway.
I agree, a bit more description, like where they are, what they look like and what they are doing. And all the names are confusing! But it is still very good!

10-09-2001, 05:27 PM	#14
Kaz Thoth - Egyptian God of Wisdom Join Date: August 16, 2001 Location: UK Posts: 2,891	I'll bump it for you. My story is up, anyway. I agree, a bit more description, like where they are, what they look like and what they are doing. And all the names are confusing! But it is still very good!