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um.. i think i said it in da, but it's good (like all ur poems) and also it goes well with the picture.. on da..
other than that. the subject is a very interesting one, even though, poems like these i would just put down calling kiddy poems (habbit forced in by english teacher....darn him...actually got to me [img]tongue.gif[/img] ) any ways this one is interesting in the fact that it's not just some ramblings of how life sucks and all. i like how you put the person in a sort of room and narrorate him through it, while explaining what's beyond.. very nice ^^
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