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Originally posted by Lioness:
I'd get rid of "Cos" it throws off the rhythm. YOu might want to rethink the amount of pronouns you have (that, a, them) but that may mess up your structure. Whichever way. [img]smile.gif[/img] Thanks for sharing.
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Like I said, it's supposed to be basic. Something uttered by Brit propaganda merchants trying to reach out to the middle and lower classes
And you're welcome [img]tongue.gif[/img]