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Old 11-29-2004, 06:38 PM   #1
Stormymystic
Knight of the Rose
 

Join Date: April 8, 2003
Location: Arkansas
Age: 48
Posts: 4,442
this is a bit of a dark poem, but decided since it was getting so much attenion on DA to post it here and see what you guys think about...


I placed the gun into my mouth,
pointed as high as I could.
I tried to pull the trigger,
but nothing worked as it should.
I heard this voice inside,
Deep inside my mind.
Have you lost your way girl?
Has hatred made you blind?
If you pull this trigger now,
Your life has been for not.
All those who have loved you,
Will reap the pain you Wrought.
There is life outside this door,
Love beyond your walls.
Why waste away you life,
trapped inside these halls?
Pull the trigger if you wish,
But see the children you will leave.
Your Friends and Family too, you see?
All of them whom shall grieve.

[ 11-29-2004, 06:40 PM: Message edited by: Stormymystic ]
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