WHOAH! that was AWESOME!!! I love FanFics like that!! i got a fanfic too, actually a few 30 or so, ertr anyway, the one im currently working on tkaes up 2 board pages (the last one finished at about page 33) and umm they're more like EPICS than stories lol... I admire people who sit down, write, and dont get up until their finished though, I wish i could make things simple and sweet like yours... you can even put in MORALS and Side-Concept proofs err whatever into a story like that, none of mine are like that at all
i should train to be a better short story writer like you! Some day I hope to reach your level... Its good, damn good, btw. I like how you ended it... [img]smile.gif[/img] my endings are always full of death and stuff and dont usually have a point to prove except that there is a ballance between good and evil :/ darn theme i can't get away from it...