Wow !!! Jerome, that is just awesome: I was absolutely glued to the screen during the entire read ! Other than that, I am almost speechless - and knowing me you should realize that is the ultimate compliment !
Well, not entirely speechless: first thing tomorrow drop out of school, send that story to all publishing houses involved with fantasy, so that they can fire all those sad pretenders that they have employed and paid so far for wrting fantasy novels and allow them generously to outbid each other when trying to buy the publishing rights for your story !
But seriously, you should really consider making writing what you will later do for a living, you have got a great gift and talent there !
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So long !
R³ aka "The Ramonster"(thanks Sir Tainly) - proud to be the official spokesman for the most noble Lady Bilqis, Desert Rose of Ironworks
Btw, the cow is queuing in the slaughterhouse right now !
[This message has been edited by Ramon de Ramon y Ramon (edited 09-24-2001).]