[Stormymystic]

hey lioness, i would welcome your thoughts on my poem, sorry i did not say that,lol i am always open to advice on if my poems are up to par, to dark to light,lol course my fav poet is edgar Alan Poe, so i guess they are always dark....but here is the very first poem i wrote,kind of a lost love poem, tell me what you think

Lonely cries

Each night I go to bed
I start to dream of you
From the day we first met
to the day you said we're through

You are always in my memory
you'realways in my mind
I will always remember
The way you were so kind

Please remember me
for I will never forget you
all these lonely cries
are all I can ever do

I know i've said it once
and I will say it again
I will loveyou forever
until the very end

...............................this poem was written when I was 11 years old, so it kind of wanders the point alittle, but it was the very first time i had everhad a boyfriend,lol